2017美国留学：完美文书带来哈佛耶鲁offer

录取院校：哈佛大学，耶鲁大学

选校：Harvard、Yale、UPenn、Columbia、U of Chicago、UCLA、Imperial College London、UCL、Oxford、Cambridge

优势及劣势分析

（）专家介绍，王同学本科就读于北京大学，综合素质相当不错，实习工作经历也很丰富。学生曾在清华卫生与发展研究中心、卫生部医疗改革办公室等地方工作，同时也做过很多研究，发表过多篇论文。劣势，GPA很一般。

推荐人选择及文书创作

推荐人1：Prof. Liu. 他是Harvard School of Public Health China Initiative的Director。由于推荐人曾指导申请人做过一些研究项目，在这封推荐信中笔者重点强调申请人扎实的专业知识、突出的研究能力、以及综合素质。

精彩句子：1. She is a multi-talented student， not only with a strong academic record， but also a shining star on and off campus through her various social and charitable activities， including earth quake disaster reli work in Sichuan province and volunteer work for the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games.

2. In addition， she has attended training programs and forums for top government officials and high-level executives， during which she was enlightened by the most authoritative Chinese experts and scholars in the field of public health and therore gained a profound understanding of this field.

3. Currently working as a researcher as well as translator， XX， with the Harvard Master student， has carried out emergency preparedness pilot projects in communities， and interviewed some renowned domestic experts and professors of School of Public Policy and Management， Tsinghua University and School of Government， Peking University， officer of the Emergency Office of the Ministry of Health， and the Vice-chairman of Red Cross Society of China.