2017年5-6月GMAT写作机经（6.17）（二十四）.

　　32 公司是不是应该除了关心员工的健康之外 连员工的个人生活也要care

　　36. Public figures should avoid expressing opinions about things that they have not personally experienced or been directly affected by. 题库B5

　　提纲：

　　public figures should avoid expressing opinions in public about things that they have not personally experienced or been directly affected by

　　On the one hand, normally public figures have many followers who treat the public figures as model, if public figures express themselves in a nonresponsible and superficial way, their followers may act accordingly.

　　Moreover, public figures are just human being like each of us, they are, in most cases, good at one field. It is unrealistic to expect them to give correct answers to all public questions. It is highly possible they will give non-sense answer to a question they never experienced or heard of.

　　Admittedly, it is hard to prevent all public figures from doing so since the wide spreading internet, TV programs. The possible way lies in educate public to listen to public figures with caution.

　　37 With the increasing emphasis on a global economy and international cooperation, people need to understand that their role as citizens of the world is more important than their role as citizens of a particular country. 题库40

　　提纲：

　　1. 两者并不是完全对立的环保

　　2. 事实上两者可以相互促进一个人在一个国家做慈善工作很可能也会有一天为别的国家的人服务

　　3. 当两者冲突的时候哪个更重要取决与不同的情况。

　　1. 有时, 很多问题是全球性的,需要世界公民的角度考虑,而非只站在一国角度. 比如,环境问题, 能源问题, 等等. 人们应该为整个地球负责任,而不仅仅是为了一个民族或国家. 因为, 如果是后者, 则很有可能只解决自己的问题, 而把危害转移到别的国家. shift the burden and threats from one nation to another…比如: 出口垃圾,比如大量进口发展中国家的木材.虽然自己的国家暂时解决了问题,但长远看, 没有国家孤立地存在, 不能short-sight and narrow mind, 因为interdependent.

　　2. 但这不意味着人们就要discard or weaken their role as citizens of one nation. 其实两者并不是incompatible, 更多时候, 可以作为complementary one—and can even be synergistic.比如the preservation of traditional culture, 人们作为一国公民,保护自己独特文化的同时, 实际上也为全球的diversity of culture作出了positive fort. 比如, 为一个国家的public service付出努力的同时, 很可能激发起公民的社会责任感和compassion and responsibility, 参与到国际public service 中, 比如很多charitarian就开始从对本国的慈善事业subsidize the school in one nation也激发起对attention to the education in the international scope.

　　View1: people’s role as citizens of the world is become more and more important in the modern society.

　　View2: Without the awareness of being citizens of a particular country, people will find no roots to behave on the stage of the world.

　　View3: these two roles, national and international, are not mutually exclusive alternatives. They can be properly combined.

　　38 It is difficult to achieve professional success without sacrifising aspects in fulfulling personal life. 题库39

　　提纲：

　　确实剥夺了人们的私人生活

　　Various facts such as cost of living, growing population, and increasingly scarce resource all contribute to a radical competitive society, forcing people to work longer hours.

　　Nevertheless, that is not to say, people cannot achieve professional success withoutsacrificing important aspects of personal lives.

　　1，健康的身心促进工作

　　A fulfilling personal life guarantees a healthy mind and energetic body which enhance professional performance.

　　2，有一个有趣的事业反过来也帮助丰富个人生活

　　Having a joyful career to devote to also in turn helps to ensure a fulfilling personal life.

　　3，不一定牺牲最重要部分

　　If to achieve professional success must have something to sacrifice, the things may not necessarily be the important aspects of personal lives.

　　1.两者并不矛盾而是相互促进相辅相成

　　2.科学技术的进步使人更高效率的工作也能让人更好的协调两者的关系

　　3.诚然一定的牺牲是必然要做出的但是绝对不是生活中的重要方面

　　1.cost of living, growing population, increasingly scarce resource… all contribute to a radical competitive society. 是客观条件force people to work longer hours, 自然, 无法避免地剥夺了人们的personal life. 这一点在很多发展中国家尤其明显:缺乏社会福利lack of social welfare, 人口膨胀population explosion, 人们面临更大的失业压力.

　　2.而反对这种观点的人说, 先进的科技已经帮助人们沟通更加便利,提高效率, 甚至在家中办公, 已经大大地减少了对个人生活的压榨. 但是close scrutiny will reveal that 事实上,这种进步,更加剧了exacerbate人们工作的强度intensity. 提高的效率, 更要求人们一天干更多事, 在家中办公的可能, 也被充分地利用成了加班overtime.

　　View1: a fulfilling personal life guarantees a healthy mind and energetic body which enhance professional performance.

　　View2: Having a joyful career to devote to also in turn help to ensure a fulfilling personal life.

　　View3: if to achieve professional success must have something to sacrifice, the things may not necessarily the important aspects of personal lives.