2017年5-6月GMAT写作机经（6.17）（九）.

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　　文章来自一个marketing consultant ，他建议 公司掀起一场distribution campaign，大力进行渠道建设，even though the products 还不是很多，满足不了大规模渠道的要求。但他认为，渠道多了，东西供不上，反而让消费者觉得这东西不好买，从而能增加demand。而且他觉得现在先把渠道建好了，一旦产品跟上了马上就能实现revenue。最后他觉得三年内个公司就能成为行业leader.

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　　The following appeared as part of an article in the education section of a Waymarsh City newspaper.

　　“Throughout the last two decades, those who earned graduate degrees found it very difficult to get jobs teaching their academic specialties at the college level. Those with graduate degrees from Waymarsh University had an especially hard time finding such jobs. But better times are coming in the next decade for all academic job seekers, including those from Waymarsh. Demographic trends indicate that an increasing number of people will be reaching college age over the next ten years; consequently, we can expect that the job market will improve dramatically for people seeking college-level teaching positions in their fields.”

　　Waymarsh城日报教育版的一篇文章：

　　过去的20年内，研究生毕业生发现找到在大学教授他们的学术专长的工作是很困难的。那些从Waymarsh获得研究生学位的要找到这类工作尤其困难。但在下个10年，寻找学术工作的人(包括那些Waymarsh大学的)的好日子要来了。人口统计趋势显示达到上大学年龄的人将在未来10年增加。我们可预期对那些在他们的领域寻找大学教学工作的人来说，工作市场将显著增大。

　　提纲：

　　1. 适龄人口增加不一定上大学人数就一定增加

　　2. 就算上大学人数增加需要的大学老师也不一定增加

　　3. 就算需要的老师增加,waymarsh的就业也不见得会水涨船高.

　　1， 人口增加也不一定都上大学。很可能都选择了就业。

　　2， even if we grant the preceding assumption上大学的人多了不一定需要更多老师，很可能大学通过增大一个班人数的方式，保持原有老师数;

　　3， 就算需要GRADUATED DEGREE的人，也不代表W也会benit from this trend，缺少信息，它可能是一个质量不好的大学，学校不会从这里的人中挑选。foretold regarding the employability

　　32 The overall quality of life in most societies has never been better than at the present time because of recent advancements in such areas as business and technology.

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　　提纲：

　　1物质生活更丰富，生活更便利，不受天灾威胁

　　2节奏太快，远离自然

　　3进步是双刃剑要好好利用double-edged sword

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　　The following editorial appeared in the Elm City paper.

　　“The construction last year of a shopping mall in downtown Oak City was a mistake. Since the mall has opened, a number of local businesses have closed, and the downtown area suffers from an acute parking shortage, and arrests for crime and vagrancy have increased in the nearby Oak City Park. Elm City should pay attention to the example of the Oak City mall and deny the application to build a shopping mall in Elm City.”

　　Elm城的报纸上的社论：

　　去年在橡树城市中心修建购物中心是个错误。由于中心开业，大量的本地企业倒闭了。而且市中心受到严重缺乏停车位的困扰。在附近的橡树城公园拘捕的罪犯和流浪汉也增加了。榆树城应该注意橡树城购物中心的例子并防止在榆树城建立购物中心。

　　提纲：

　　1.作者所给出的所有问题和商场的建设都是时间上的前后关系而没有给出证据显示他们的因果关系

　　2.作者只给出了不好的结果而没有给出好的影响很可能权衡利弊之后被选择的是要开这个商场

　　3.这个商场的建立不应该也不能由此就否定以后所有的商场的建立

　　1.To begin with, the author fails to establish the causal relationship between the shopping mall&aposs opening and the closing of local businesses.

　　2.Moreover, the author&aposs conclusion is also based on the assumption that the shopping mall has caused the increase in crime and vagrancy.

　　3.Finally, even if the shopping mall did cause the closing of local business and the increasing crime and vagrancy in Oak City, the author&aposs prediction that Elm City will suffer from the same fate as Oak City is still open to doubt.