2017年5-6月GMAT写作机经（6.17）（十）.

　　34 题库32 2次

　　The following appeared in the editorial section of a West Cambria newspaper.

　　“A recent review of the West Cambria volunteer ambulance service revealed a longer average response time to accidents than was reported by a commercial ambulance squad located in East Cambria. In order to provide better patient care for accident victims and to raise revenue for our town by collecting service fees for ambulance use, we should disband our volunteer service and hire a commercial ambulance service.”

　　一份西Cambria报纸的社论片断：

　　最近的对西Cambria的志愿救护服务的回顾显示出其对事故的平均应对时间比设在东Cambria的一个商业救护班要长。为了给事故受害者提供更好的医护服务并通过收取急救服务费来提高我们镇的税收，我们应当解散志愿救护并雇佣商业救护服务。

　　提纲：

　　1.对事故的反映时间诚然是评价服务质量的一个因素但并不是唯一的因素.所以仅仅因为东区的商业救护班的反映时间短就认定商业救护办的服务更好是gratuitous的.

　　2.就算东区的商业班的服务质量更好也并不意味着,西区用商业班就会有一样的成效.因为东西区的情况是不同的.很可能西区的志愿者更有服务,献身意识.

　　3.此外除非商业班收十分昂贵的服务费用或者有十分多的事故事实这些都是不可能的, 改成商业是不见得就可以给该镇增加很多税收的.所以把这一点作为理由是不正确的.

　　1.错误类比 两个城市不一样，很可能因为西和东的不一样，比如，路的情况traffic condition。可能东的车辆更好。服务的态度更好。

　　而且没有说东的志愿情况如何，很可能东的志愿比商业的快。

　　2.草率的判断：就算是商业的更快，也不一定更好。反映时间不是唯一的因素，有其他——比如服务的质量，态度，器材等等。

　　另外，除非商业可以charge considerable fees 或者 accident rate非常高，否则未必带来可观的revenue。

　　A. In the first place, the arguer ignores other factors that might account for the longer average response time as revealed bu the recent review.

　　B. In the second place, the arguer infairly reduces better patient care to shorter response time to accidents.

　　C. Finally, the arguer fails to support the claim that hiring a commercial ambulance service would automatically raise revenue for West Cambria.

　　35 94. The following appeared as part of an article in a computer magazine. 2次

　　“A year ago Apex Manufacturing bought its managers computers for their homes and paid for telephone connections so that they could access Apex computers and data files from home after normal business hours. Since last year, productivity at Apex has increased by 15 percent. Other companies can learn from the success at Apex: given home computers and access to company resources, employees will work additional hours at home and thereby increase company profits.”

　　36 office work比起working at home好很多：(1)people work at home tend to postphone their scheduals(2)：因为他们更少出门people will become less sociably and professionally isolated (3): people will be interrupted by telephone and noisy neighbors.

　　Issue: a nation should set up a highly competitive educational system( students compete among themselves and against other students) --- in order to ensure its economic profit.