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AA1：一个工厂比这个公司的其他工厂的生产的效率比较 高，所以这个公司想把所有的生产都集中在这个公司， 然后把生产机器的任务都让别的工厂来完成。
AA2：“Studies have found that employees of not-for-profit organizations and charities are often more highly motivated than employees of for-profit corporations to perform well at work when their performance is not being monitored or evaluated. Interviews with employees of not- for-profit organizations suggest that the reason for their greater motivation is the beli that their work helps to improve society. Because they believe in the importance of their work, they have personal reasons to perform well, even when no financial reward is present. Thus, if our corporation began donating a significant portion of its profits to humanitarian causes, our employees’ motivation and productivity would increase substantially and our overall profits would increase as well.”
Discuss how well reasoned . . .etc.
AI1：“Financial gain should be the most important factor in choosing a career.”
AI2：Employers should prohibit employees from engaging in unhealthy behaviors, both at work place and in their personal lives.
Amy GUO 经验： 16年 案例：4272 擅长：美国,澳洲,亚洲,欧洲
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