2017年6-7月GMAT写作机经（7.19）（十二）.

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　　AA1：“Commercial real estate prices have been rising steadily in the Sandida Heights neighborhood for several years, while the prices in the adjacent neighborhood of Palm Grove have remained the same. It seems obvious, then, that a retail space in Sandida Heights must now be much more expensive than a similar space in Palm Grove, which was not the case several years ago. So, it appears that retail spaces in Sandida Heights are now overpriced relative to those in Palm Grove. Therore, it would be in our financial interest to purchase a retail space in Palm Grove rather than in Sandida Heights.”

　　AA2：AA 就是说一个GG retail shop sale 上升但是profit下降 然后说店里的商品都定位在高端顾客的 所以这个retailer想减少cost就去裁员然后减少展示 一个survey说一个CAFE的顾客和这个商店很相似啊 然后说plan to partner with the cafe

　　考古6月jj-21 (zcool童鞋考古)

　　说一家商店(Gourmont 可能没拼对)过去都是高增长，但最近利润下降。他们家的顾客都是高消费群体，如喜欢买贵的东西及需要一些专家服务之类的，然后为了提升利润，需要eliminate some product , 还说要当地的一家咖啡店合作(partner 关系)去吸引新的顾客。然后利润就会提高之类的

　　AA3：航空公司那个，说油价涨了，利润下降了，但是其它的航空公司油价也涨了，但是其它公司却又得获利了，所以这个航空公司就把责任归到他们多加了5辆飞机上面，说要想获利，就要取消那5辆飞机。

　　V2：AW 航空公司的business analyst 给公司发的一封信 公司去年利润下降了20%，可能的原因有两个：一是去年油价上涨，导致燃料成本上升，二是去年公司新开了airlines to five cities。但是去年仍有一些airlines的利润得到了改善，考虑到所有的airlines都受到了油价上涨的影响，但是有的盈利了，所以油价不是公司亏损的原因。排除油价后，可能的原因就只能是新的airlines，所以建议公司取消新的airlines。

　　6月jj-19 (zcool童鞋考古)

　　19 3次

　　说有个航空公司利润下降了，因为燃料费涨了，年初又新开辟了几条航线增加了成本。不过所有其它航空公司都有盈利，说明不是燃料费涨了的问题，而是新航线的问题。所以应该取消这些新航线。

　　V2：首先是去年有个 airline&aposs profit declined by 20%， the oil cost increased and this airline add 5 new flights(机经这里写的是新航线~但是我觉得flights应该是又买了几个飞机吧)所以这个公司认为at least one of them cause the declined profit. 但是由于全行业都面临油价上涨，some airlines 利润却上涨了，所以这家航空公司觉得就是new flights的问题~所以决定今天初应该eliminate these new flights

　　AA4：去年，我们向员工调查他们认为X公司应该进行的改进，让他们把改进按重要性排列。

　　结果列印为一张可能的改进的表格。根据调查中员工的反应，“加强员工和管理层的沟通”最具重要性，稳居调查表之首。如你所知，那以后我们建立了由高层管理人员组织，雇员可以自愿参加的常规交流会。因此，看来X的多数员工认为最应该进行的改进已经完成了。

　　AA5：“A recent review of the West Cambria volunteer ambulance service revealed a longer average response time to accidents than was reported by a commercial ambulance squad located in East Cambria. In order to provide better patient care for accident victims and to raise revenue for our town by collecting service fees for ambulance use, we should disband our volunteer service and hire a commercial ambulance service.”

　　AA6：“Eight years ago, our firm’s profits were increasing with each new employee we added. We discovered that eachemployee had the skills and motivation to generate more revenue for the firm than his or her salary cost us.However, for the past two years, our profit margin has been falling, even though we have continued to addemployees. Thus, our newer employees are not generating enough revenue to justify their salaries. We mustnot be hiring new employees with the same level of skills and motivation as those we used to attract. Clearly,then, failures in the human resources department account for our falling profits.”

　　AI1：人们要大幅度延长life span, if achieved, 会给现有资源带来burden, 减低人们生活质量

　　AA2：people depend too much on computers while computer improve our lives

　　AI3：“Responsibility for preserving the natural environment ultimately belongs to each individual person, not to government.”

　　AI4：“由于对现代社会来说，科学和技术正在变得越来越基本，学校应该投入更多的时间教授科学技术而减少艺术和人文的教育。”

　　AI5：Because of recent advancements in business and technology, the overall quality of life in most societies has never been better than at the present time.“因为最近商业和技术方面的发展，大多数社会的总体社会质量前所未有的好。”

　　AI6：Everywhere, it seems, there are obvious signs to indicate that people is more respectful of each other&aposs difference.

　　AI7：in a class, the result of learning depends more on the quality of other students than the quality of the teacher