2017年6-7月GMAT写作机经（7.19）（十三）.

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　　AA1：“Commercial real estate prices have been rising steadily in the Sandida Heights neighborhood for several years, while the prices in the adjacent neighborhood of Palm Grove have remained the same. It seems obvious, then, that a retail space in Sandida Heights must now be much more expensive than a similar space in Palm Grove, which was not the case several years ago. So, it appears that retail spaces in Sandida Heights are now overpriced relative to those in Palm Grove. Therore, it would be in our financial interest to purchase a retail space in Palm Grove rather than in Sandida Heights.”

　　AA2：挖矿的企业在行业危机当中准备转到新能源产业，因为该行业近几年来表现突出。

　　AA3：是self-employed怎么怎么不好，会在社会关系和finance上吃亏

　　AA4：乔治是一个餐馆的创办人，在大学城附近开的餐馆生意好，打算在附近开三家，并且培训一直和他一起干的三名员工做那三个店子的经理，乔治预测店子开后的利润是现在的三倍。

　　AA5:是说有个做早餐的公司卖的早餐麦片中含有丰富的维生素K，比其他同类产品都要多，但是现在购买他们产品的消费者大多数是喜欢这个麦片的味道，而并不知道吃这个麦片还有那么多的好处。因此那人就发话说，他们要在广告中着重强调他们麦片中的维生素K含量，并要重新设计产品的包装，在上面注明详细的数据，并加上科学验证的报告，通过这些方式他们可以增加麦片的消费量。

　　考古~ by ddcarolyn

　　V1:the Cunch(貌似) Breakfast cereal contain 20% more nutrients than any other cereal in the city XXX. Moreover, in the survey conducted by us, 75% consumers prer to the taste of Cunch Breakfast cereal than other cereal products. However, 消费者似乎并没有显著的青睐这个cereal。Therore, in order to increase the sales, we should redesign the front of the Cunch Breakfast box with detailed information about the two features mentioned above(即多20%的营养，75%认为口味出众) (题库里没找到) 3次

　　V2说一个cereal的厂家的备忘录：认为该厂出产的cereal的一大优势是包含vitamin K。另外在一项调查中，有75%的人表示喜欢cereal口味。但是现在销售量降低。建议在做广告中更换包装盒，并注明该cereal的两大优势(就是包 含vitamin k和口味好)。

　　V3 一下来自公司营销总监的备忘录：一家生产cereal 公司生产的cereal含有的维生素k的数量比竞争对手都要多20%，而且一项调查显示75%的顾客认为该公司生产的cereal比竞争对手都要好，但是 该公司的销售量并不高。因此营销总监建议公司重新对包装盒进行设计，把该产品含有比竞争对手20%的vitamin K 和上述的那个调查贴在包装盒上。

　　AA6:“The construction last year of a shopping mall in downtown Oak City was a mistake. Since the mall has opened, a number of local businesses have closed, and the downtown area suffers from an acute parking shortage, and arrests for crime and vagrancy have increased in the nearby Oak City Park. Elm City should pay attention to the example of the Oak City mall and deny the application to build a shopping mall in Elm City.”

　　AA7：一个公司的Manager有了什么free connection 下班以后可以工作，然后公司的利润增加了15% 结论是其他公司也可以这么做来增加利润。

　　AA8： 6月的时候 车行把高档车在显眼的位置，好车和便宜车的销售额都增长了，当橱窗里换成低档车的时候，总销售额就下降了，于是经理就说， 销售额和车的摆放位置有关系

　　AA9：A recent review of the West Cambria volunteer ambulance service revealed a longer average response time to accidents than was reported by a commercial ambulance squad located in East Cambria. In order to provide better patient care for accident victims and to raise revenue for our town by collecting service fees for ambulance use, we should disband our volunteer service and hire a commercial ambulance service.”

　　AA10：national parks的旅游收入减少，政府的税收减少，另外在公园下面发现了大量的能源物质，所以为了增加政府税收，增加就业，应该建议the mining。。

　　AA11：因为去年对mining technology 的demanding下降，而有些新能源公司在新能源领域最近很成功。BC公司考虑转向新能源，这个战略会保证BC在未来不损失利润和收入。

　　AA12：Throughout the last two decades, those woho earned graduate degrees found it very difficult to get jobs teaching their academic specialties at the college level. Those with graduate degrees from Waymarsh University had an especially hard time finding such jobs. But better times are coming in the next decade for all academic job seekers, including those from Waymarsh. Demographic trends indicate that an increasing number of people will be reaching college age over the next 10 years: consequently, we can expect that the job market will improve dramatically for people seeking college-level teaching positions in their fields

　　AI1：Celebrities has unique power address social problem, as they have high profile and resource others don&apost have.

　　AI2：我们是不是太依赖电脑了

　　AI3：“Since the physical work environment affects employee productivity and morale, the employees themselves should have the right to decide how their workplace is designed.

　　AI4：Governments should not be responsible for regulating businesses and other organizations. Instead, society would benit if the organizations themselves assumed responsibility for establishing and enforcing their own standards and regulations.

　　AI5：Financial gain is the most important factor in choosing a career.

　　AI6：“It is unrealistic to expect individual nations to make, independently,the sacrifices necessary to conserve energy. International leadership and worldwide cooperation are essential if we expect to protect the world’s energy resources for future generations.”Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading.

　　AI7：在一个group或者organization里面share responsibility，然后需要有一个领导者central authorization的，这样才是最有效的方式

　　AI8：需要全球合作来保护能源

　　AI9："People have a duty to disobey laws that they consider unjust."