2017年7-8月GMAT写作机经（至8.2）（三）.

　　731 AWA汇总(一)

　　AWA 某学校用了interactive computer instruction后辍学率低了，学生的表现也好了，所以建议以后的预算要对所有课程adopt interactive computer instruction

　　The following appeared as part of a newspaper editorial.

　　“Two years ago Nova High School began to use interactive computer instruction in three academic subjects. The school dropout rate declined immediately, and last year’s graduates have reported some impressive achievements in college. In future budgets the school board should use a greater portion of the available funds to buy more computers, and all schools in the district should adopt interactive computer instruction throughout the curriculum.”

　　Discuss how well reasoned... etc.

　　AWA:第二个是一个根据一个这个镇东边部分的数据说明了支援者救助车祸反应时间慢于商业的救护车?然后政府就决定用商业的救护车来增加政府收益(注意，题目最上方说这个政府是西部的)

　　The following appeared in the editorial section of a West Cambria newspaper.

　　“A recent review of the West Cambria volunteer ambulance service revealed a longer average response time to accidents than was reported by a commercial ambulance squad located in East Cambria. In order to provide better patient care for accident victims and to raise revenue for our town by collecting service fees for ambulance use, we should disband our volunteer service and hire a commercial ambulance service.”

　　Discuss how well reasoned... etc.

　　“The Easy Credit Company would gain an advantage over competing credit card services if we were to donate a portion of the proceeds from the use of our cards to a well-known environmental organization in exchange for the use of its symbol or logo on our card. Since a recent poll shows that a large percentage of the public is concerned about environmental issues, this policy would attract new customers, increase use among existing customers, and enable us to charge interest rates that are higher than the lowest ones available.”

　　The following appeared as part of a plan proposed by an executive of the Easy Credit Company to the president.

　　“The Easy Credit Company would gain an advantage over competing credit card services if we were to donate a portion of the proceeds from the use of our cards to a well-known environmental organization in exchange for the use of its symbol or logo on our card. Since a recent poll shows that a large percentage of the public is concerned about environmental issues, this policy would attract new customers, increase use among existing customers, and enable us to charge interest rates that are higher than the lowest ones available.”

　　Discuss how well reasoned... etc.

　　Argument: It is unwise to quit a stable office job in order to be self-employed and work at home. 给出的理由是，在家办公容易受neighbor影响，没效率，经常avoid working等等。然后又说在家办公isolated with the work place, 对career advancement不好。所以不应该quit stable office job and become self-employed.

　　AWA 有个地区有三家店连续两年营业额上升，因此他们决定再开三家店。并且要求他们遵循一个program:任何一个顾客在去了两家店以后，可以获得去第三家店的折扣，这样可以保证三家店都获利什么的………

　　The following appeared as part of the business plan of the Capital Idea investment firm.

　　“Across town in the Park Hill district, the Thespian Theater, Pizzazz Pizza, and the Niblick Golf Club have all had business increases within the past two years. Capital Idea should therore invest in the Roxy Playhouse, the Slice-o’-Pizza, and the Divot Golf Club, three new businesses in the Irongate district. As a condition, we should require them to participate in a special program: Any customer who patronizes two of the businesses will receive a substantial discount at the third. By motivating customers to patronize all three, we will thus contribute to the profitability of each and maximize our return.”

　　AA：一个software company 公司准备cut budget 因为连续三年的利润不好，他们决定向auto industry学习，auto industry用part-time的labor代替full-time employees节约了不少的成本,他们的利润相当的丰厚，所以software company也会采取auto industry的方法来获取利润。。。

　　AA: 老题，就是说那个empolyees of not for profit orgnizations are more motivated than other employees, so our corporation should donate money to humanitarian causes to maximize the overall profits

　　The following appeared in a memorandum from the head of a human resources department at a major automobile manufacturing company to the company&aposs managers:

　　“Studies have found that employees of not-for-profit organizations and charities are often more highly motivated than employees of for-profit corporations to perform well at work when their performance is not being monitored or evaluated. Interviews with employees of not-for-profit organizations suggest that the reason for their greater motivation is the beli that their work helps to improve society. Because they believe in the importance of their work, they have personal reasons to perform well, even when no financial reward is present. Thus, if our corporation began donating a significant portion of its profits to humanitarian causes, our employees’ motivation and productivity would increase substantially and our overall profits would increase as well.”

　　Discuss how well reasoned . . .etc.

　　作文AA是说一个fitness公司的manager通过一个survey发现 现在人们越来越关注healthy life, 通过吃现在很受欢迎

　　organic food可以达到很健康的水品，所以要在他的3家fitness gym里面都要加一个organic grocery section。这样可以收到很多顾客的青睐。获得更多profit。