GMAT机经：2017年11月作文AI（至11.30）（十二）.

2010年11月GMAT机经，2010年GMAT作文机经整理，至11月30日，AI篇，共27篇。澳际留学祝您考试顺利。

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39. “It is difficult for people to achieve professional success without sacrificing important aspects of a fulfilling personal life.”

1. 两者并不矛盾而是相互促进相辅相成

2. 科学技术的进步使人更高效率的工作也能让人更好的协调两者的关系

3. 诚然一定的牺牲是必然要做出的但是绝对不是生活中的重要方面

4.

1. cost of living, growing population, increasingly scarce resource… all contribute to a radical competitive society. 是客观条件force people to work longer hours, 自然, 无法避免地剥夺了人们的personal life. 这一点在很多发展中国家尤其明显:缺乏社会福利lack of social welfare, 人口膨胀population explosion, 人们面临更大的失业压力.

2. 而反对这种观点的人说, 先进的科技已经帮助人们沟通更加便利,提高效率, 甚至在家中办公, 已经大大地减少了对个人生活的压榨. 但是close scrutiny will reveal that 事实上,这种进步,更加剧了exacerbate人们工作的强度intensity. 提高的效率, 更要求人们一天干更多事, 在家中办公的可能, 也被充分地利用成了加班overtime.

View1: a fulfilling personal life guarantees a healthy mind and energetic body which enhance professional performance.

View2: Having a joyful career to devote to also in turn help to ensure a fulfilling personal life.

View3: if to achieve professional success must have something to sacrifice, the things may not necessarily the important aspects of personal lives.

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9. “Employees should keep their private lives and personal activities as separate as possible from the workplace.”

1， Personal activities should not be brought to one&aposs workplace since they can reduce one&aposs ficiency. Thinking about one&aposs private life can distract one from his or her work.

2， Talking about private life and doing personal activities can disturb other fellow workers.

3， It is inevitable for a person to think about his or her private life and to do some personal activities at the workplace. But an employee should do his or her best to focus on the work when at workplace.

1， it is true that employees can hardly only work like a machine, that is to say, inevitably, they may carry some personal emotions while working. Sharing the personal interests and activities moderately may help build the positive relationship among colleagues.

2， However, it is not a wise choice to let the employees to bring all their private life and personal activities to the workplace. 仍然举上面的例子来说，a mother worried about her child cannot ficiently focus on her task even if the deadline is coming. a girl who breaks up with her boyfriend during the work time will probably talk to other fellows about the bad emotion, which may have a potentially negative influence on the productivity of the staff. so on…

allow personal life to impinge upon their job performance or intrude on coworkers.(sample)

Optional words:

Separate/ isolate/ exclude

Thesis sentence: I agree with the author’s point of view towards the relationship between private life and work because bring private life to workplaces has many bad fects on both the one who does so and people around him.

View1: personal activities should not be brought to the workplace since they can reduce one’s ficiency.

Evidence:

View2: dealing with one’s personal affairs at the workplace will inevitably produce negative fects on other co-workers.

Evidence: Inspirer imitations thus affect the morale and productivity. Working atmosphere, morale, corporate culture.

View3: since sometimes problems of private life will catch people all the time, the supervisors should be more sensitive to their subordinator’s difficulties, and help them to handle them properly.

2010年11月GMAT机经，2010年GMAT作文机经整理，至11月30日，AI篇，共27篇。澳际留学祝您考试顺利。

2010年11月GMAT机经，2010年GMAT作文机经整理，至11月30日，AI篇，共27篇。澳际留学祝您考试顺利。

26. 出现日期：11.30shine0713 (

39. “It is difficult for people to achieve professional success without sacrificing important aspects of a fulfilling personal life.”

1. 两者并不矛盾而是相互促进相辅相成

2. 科学技术的进步使人更高效率的工作也能让人更好的协调两者的关系

3. 诚然一定的牺牲是必然要做出的但是绝对不是生活中的重要方面

4.

1. cost of living, growing population, increasingly scarce resource… all contribute to a radical competitive society. 是客观条件force people to work longer hours, 自然, 无法避免地剥夺了人们的personal life. 这一点在很多发展中国家尤其明显:缺乏社会福利lack of social welfare, 人口膨胀population explosion, 人们面临更大的失业压力.

2. 而反对这种观点的人说, 先进的科技已经帮助人们沟通更加便利,提高效率, 甚至在家中办公, 已经大大地减少了对个人生活的压榨. 但是close scrutiny will reveal that 事实上,这种进步,更加剧了exacerbate人们工作的强度intensity. 提高的效率, 更要求人们一天干更多事, 在家中办公的可能, 也被充分地利用成了加班overtime.

View1: a fulfilling personal life guarantees a healthy mind and energetic body which enhance professional performance.

View2: Having a joyful career to devote to also in turn help to ensure a fulfilling personal life.

View3: if to achieve professional success must have something to sacrifice, the things may not necessarily the important aspects of personal lives.

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