2017年GMAT机经,7月GMAT作文机经AA(至7.10)(十三).

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20. AA. Research indicating people who exercise are more healthy that those who don’t, so the company decide to build a gym to reduce the health insurance coverage, and expect the cost will be reduce by50%

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No.106 or 108. "Research indicates that those who exercise regularly are hospitalized less than half as often as those who don’t exercise. By providing a well-equipped gym for Saluda’s municipal employees, we should be able to reduce the cost of our group health insurance coverage by approximately 50 percent and thereby achieve a balanced town budget."

Argument: 根据一份research的调查显示，exercise regularly people hospitalized 的几率比 do not exercise 的people 小一半。因此

AA: 一个研究说锻炼的人去医院的次数少50％，所以城市要建健身设施，可以减少医疗保险投入50％，减少城市财政赤字。

提供观点：

1. There is no causal relationship between the development of the employees&apos health and the provision of a well-equipped gym.

2. Therore, the reduction of the cost of group health insurance coverage expected by the author is not guaranteed.

3. Even if the provision of the gym can cause a reduction of the cost, no one can rely on it to achieve a balanced town budget since the health incidents occur very randomly.

北美范文：

In this memo Saluda’s business manager recommends that the town provide a gym for its employees as a means of balancing the town’s budget. The manager reasons that since studies show that people who exercise regularly are hospitalized less than half as often than those who don’t exercise, Saluda could save approximately 50% on the cost of its group health insurance coverage by providing its employees with a well-equipped gym. The savings on insurance would balance the town’s budget. The manager’s argument is unconvincing because it rests on several unsupported and dubious assumptions.

First, the manager assumes that Saluda’s employees will exercise regularly if a well-equipped facility is provided for them. This assumption is questionable since the mere fact that a gym is made available for employee use is no guarantee that they will avail themselves of it at all, let alone on a regular basis.

Second, the manager assumes that Saluda’s employees do not exercise regularly. Once again, the manager offers no support for this crucial assumption. Obviously, if all of Sauda’s employees already engage in daily exercise, the hospitalization rate will be unaffected by equipping an exercise facility and no savings will be realized on the group health insurance.

Third, the manager assumes that there is a direct relation between the hospitalization rate for employees and the cost of their group health insurance such that a reduction in the hospitalization rate will result in a corresponding reduction in the cost of insurance. While this may turn out to be true, the manager has failed to offer any evidence for this claim.

Finally, the manager assumes that the cost of building a well-equipped exercise facility will not negate the savings realized on the group health insurance. Until evidence has been provided to show that this is not the case, the manager’s plan is unacceptable.

In conclusion, the business manager’s proposal to provide an exercise facility as a means of balancing Saluda’s budget is not convincing. To strengthen the argument, evidence would have to be provided for each of the assumptions listed in the previous analysis.

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20. AA. Research indicating people who exercise are more healthy that those who don’t, so the company decide to build a gym to reduce the health insurance coverage, and expect the cost will be reduce by50%

感谢Kalahari98957

No.106 or 108. "Research indicates that those who exercise regularly are hospitalized less than half as often as those who don’t exercise. By providing a well-equipped gym for Saluda’s municipal employees, we should be able to reduce the cost of our group health insurance coverage by approximately 50 percent and thereby achieve a balanced town budget."

Argument: 根据一份research的调查显示，exercise regularly people hospitalized 的几率比 do not exercise 的people 小一半。因此

AA: 一个研究说锻炼的人去医院的次数少50％，所以城市要建健身设施，可以减少医疗保险投入50％，减少城市财政赤字。

提供观点：

1. There is no causal relationship between the development of the employees&apos health and the provision of a well-equipped gym.

2. Therore, the reduction of the cost of group health insurance coverage expected by the author is not guaranteed.

3. Even if the provision of the gym can cause a reduction of the cost, no one can rely on it to achieve a balanced town budget since the health incidents occur very randomly. 上123下

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