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17.
政府不应为regulating businesses and other organizations负责,相反society能够获益if organizations themselves assumed the blablabla.....enforcing xxxxxxx突然忘了,囧,意思就是如果组织能自我加强约束的话。
原题:No.131 “Governments should not be responsible for regulating businesses and other organizations. Instead, society would benit if the organizations themselves assumed responsibility for establishing and enforcing their own standards and regulations.”
“政府不应该对规范企业和其他组织负责。相反,如果组织自身承担建立和执行他们自己的标准和规范的责任,那么社会会得利。”
思路:
Admittedly, the goveronment should not regulate the business or other organizations too much. Too much supervision will harm the development of the business or an organization.
Let the business alone to regulate itself will also cause problems. The ultimate goal of the business is to gain benit, therore all the activities will serve this pivotal goal even at the expense of the social benit.
The ideal combination can be the midst.
too much interference from the government would undoubtedly impede the development of businesses and organizations. 1, 政府干涉过多可能或扼杀企业的积极性positivity. 显然如果没有自主决定the power of independently making decisions, 那么eventually, lead to the less active economy. 2, 政府过度的exorbitant干涉可能会打乱市场发展的自然规律disturb the natural order of the market. 比如regulation on the type of product 可能市场上的excessive demand or supply.
但是也不是说政府should assume no necessary supervision over the business. 首先, 毕竟,企业的一切行为都是为了利益最大化. 缺乏管理,很可能产生很多negative results.政府有义务确保keep the national market in healthy condition. 如果缺乏suitable regulation, 有可能会出现恶性的竞争inordinate competition. 又比如Enron cheat on the financial condition. 第二, 政府有时要帮助企业度过recession.依靠企业自身的力量, 可能不能overcome the huge destroy of the recession.
要有适当的regulation, 同时adequate freedom. 才能健康地发展.
View1: if organizations are allowed to establish their own regulations, the enforcement of regulations will be enhanced and the governmental burden of organizations will be released.
View2: however, the lack of authoritative and uniform regulations will ultimately do harm to both organizations and entire society.
Evidence: disturb of market order, monopoly, unfair competition.
To society: Unqualified products, high prices, environmental pollution, waste of resources
Do harm to international trade because the lack of uniform standards and the assurance of credit.
18. 3次
近来很多有violence 的television programes ,movies,and other forms of entertainment 都很popular.然后就说那些做enttertainment 的人应该继续在他们的作品里加violence
类似原题:No.54 Popular entertainment is overly influenced by commercial interests. Superficiality, obscenity, and violence characterize films and televsion today because those qualities are commercially successful.
考古:
Portrayals of violence have proven commercially successful in television programs, movies, songs, and other forms of popular entertainment. Therore, those who create popular entertainment should continue to incorporate violence into their products.
中文的大概意思是-在电视节目、电影、歌曲及其他形式的大众娱乐节目中加入暴力被证明是成功的商业模式。因此,那些创做流行的娱乐节目的人应该继续将其纳入到自己的产品中去。
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范文:
Clearly, most popular films and television shows are superficial and/or include a certain amount of violence or obscenity. Just as clearly, popularity leads to commercial success. But can we conclude that these productions are overly influenced by commercial interests? Perhaps not, since some popular films and television shows are neither superficial, obscene, nor violent. Closer scrutiny, however, reveals that most such productions actually support, not disprove, the thesis that commercial interests dictate movie and television content. (哪有必要作这样的二次转折)
One would-be (自称自许的)threat to the thesis can be found in lower-budget independent films, which tend to focus more on character development and topical social issues than on sensationalism. Recently, a few such films have supplanted Hollywood’s major studio productions as top box-office (adj. 票房的) hits. Does this mean that profit potential no longer dictates the content of films? No; it simply suggests that the tastes and prerences of the movie-going public are shifting.A second ostensible challenge to the thesis can be found in companies such as Disney, whose productions continue to achieve great popularity and commercial success, without resort to an appeal to baser interests. Yet it is because these productions are commercially successful that they proliferate.
The only cogent challenge to the thesis is found in perennial television favorites such as “Nova,” a public television show that is neither commercially supported nor influenced. However, such shows are more in the nature of education than entertainment, and for every one program like “Nova” there are several equally popular—and highly superficial—programs.
With few exceptions, then, commercial success of certain films and television shows is no accidental byproduct of popularity; it is the intentional result of producers’ forts to maximize profits.
19. 3次
很多人抱怨电脑影响了现在的生活,问你的意见。
Some ppl argue that we are more and more dependent on our computers, but computers have been continually changing our lives.
20. 4次
V1 关于experienced 和candidate for leader position
V2 The mose experienced candidate must be the best candidate for a( the?) leadership position.
求原题啊这道题,每个JJ提供同学都写得好模糊啊
21.
Newspaper is the most important of the all media that provides news
考古:
V1 There are many sources to get news today, such as newspaper, internet, radio. The newspaper is the most important one.
V2 现在大家可以通过电视收音机和网络了解新闻,但是报纸是最重要的渠道.
思路:
承认报纸仍然很重要,很多人有早晨读报的习惯
但报纸现在恐怕不是最重要的source of news了。Internet、mobile phone作为新闻的来源很可能已经超过了newspaper,它们方便、更新及时,而报纸顶多日刊,can’t provide latest news
报纸浪费资源,不环保
报纸在将来很可能被淘汰,可以举一些数据例子,比如现在人们从报纸上阅读的消息占总消息量的百分之几,十年前是多少balabala
以上澳际留学更新2011年gmat机经,以上2011年10-11月gmat作文机经更新,AI,10月27至11月3日,共34题。希望大家的gmat考试顺利!
gmat机经10-11月gmat作文机经AI(至11.3)(五)gmat作文机经以下澳际留学更新2011gmat机经,以下2011年10-11月gmat作文机经更新,AI,10月27至11月3日,共34题。希望大家的gmat考试顺利!
17.
政府不应为regulating businesses and other organizations负责,相反society能够获益if organizations themselves assumed the blablabla.....enforcing xxxxxxx突然忘了,囧,意思就是如果组织能自我加强约束的话。
原题:No.131 “Governments should not be responsible for regulating businesses and other organizations. Instead, society would benit if the organizations themselves assumed responsibility for establishing and enforcing their own standards and regulations.”
“政府不应该对规范企业和其他组织负责。相反,如果组织自身承担建立和执行他们自己的标准和规范的责任,那么社会会得利。”
思路:
Admittedly, the goveronment should not regulate the business or other organizations too much. Too much supervision will harm the development of the business or an organization.
Let the business alone to regulate itself will also cause problems. The ultimate goal of the business is to gain benit, therore all the activities will serve this pivotal goal even at the expense of the social benit.
The ideal combination can be the midst.
too much interference from the government would undoubtedly impede the development of businesses and organizations. 1, 政府干涉过多可能或扼杀企业的积极性positivity. 显然如果没有自主决定the power of independently making decisions, 那么eventually, lead to the less active economy. 2, 政府过度的exorbitant干涉可能会打乱市场发展的自然规律disturb the natural order of the market. 比如regulation on the type of product 可能市场上的excessive demand or supply.
但是也不是说政府should assume no necessary supervision over the business. 首先, 毕竟,企业的一切行为都是为了利益最大化. 缺乏管理,很可能产生很多negative results.政府有义务确保keep the national market in healthy condition. 如果缺乏suitable regulation, 有可能会出现恶性的竞争inordinate competition. 又比如Enron cheat on the financial condition. 第二, 政府有时要帮助企业度过recession.依靠企业自身的力量, 可能不能overcome the huge destroy of the recession.
要有适当的regulation, 同时adequate freedom. 才能健康地发展.
View1: if organizations are allowed to establish their own regulations, the enforcement of regulations will be enhanced and the governmental burden of organizations will be released.
View2: however, the lack of authoritative and uniform regulations will ultimately do harm to both organizations and entire society.
Evidence: disturb of market order, monopoly, unfair competition.
To society: Unqualified products, high prices, environmental pollution, waste of resources
Do harm to international trade because the lack of uniform standards and the assurance of credit.
18. 3次
近来很多有violence 的television programes ,movies,and other forms of entertainment 都很popular.然后就说那些做enttertainment 的人应该继续在他们的作品里加violence
类似原题:No.54 Popular entertainment is overly influenced by commercial interests. Superficiality, obscenity, and violence characterize films and televsion today because those qualities are commercially successful.
考古:
Portrayals of violence have proven commercially successful in television programs, movies, songs, and other forms of popular entertainment. Therore, those who create popular entertainment should continue to incorporate violence into their products.
中文的大概意思是-在电视节目、电影、歌曲及其他形式的大众娱乐节目中加入暴力被证明是成功的商业模式。因此,那些创做流行的娱乐节目的人应该继续将其纳入到自己的产品中去。
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