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19. V1 by cindy882 AI ---No one can be real success or "become rich" in the business by conforming conventional practices or ways of thinking.
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原题:No. 81 No one can possibly achieve any real and lasting success or ‘get rich’ in business by conforming to conventional practices or ways of thinking.
思路:
Thesis sentence: Whether a conformist can achieve lasting success or "get rich" in business depends primarily on the type of business involved. Iconoclasts rise to the top in newer industries and in those where consumer demand is in constant flux. Conformists ultimately prevail, however, in traditional service industries ensconced in systems and regulations.
View1: In consumer-driven industries, innovation, product differentiation, and creativity are crucial to lasting success
Evidence: retail and media sectors. And in technology, companies that fail to break away from last year&aposs paradigm are soon lt behind by the competition.
View2: However, in traditional service industries—such as finance, accounting, insurance, legal services, and health care—lasting success and riches come not to nonconformists but rather to those who can deliver services most fectively within the confines of established practices, policies, and regulations.
Evidence: Citibank gain high reputation for its insistence in comprehensively considerate services
感谢zjnzjn 提供观点:
l innovation点:大多数都着力于如何在既有的基础上做到更加ficient,然而一个更好的strategy就是differentiation,用另一种不同的角度:例子,当大家都在想如何把CD做得更好的时候,有人推出了MP3,CD瞬间被邈。。。
l 创新的重要性:侧面看,很多的学校都推出了和innovation有关的课程,从另一方面表明了当今社会business world对创新的重视。别人有,你没有,没有立足之地
l convention点:不能老天马行空的想idea,也要脚踏实地。例子:寂静里的一篇阅读:一个厂老想着如何innovation,不生产,结果技术成熟了生产跟不上。。
ü A conformist can achieve any real success especially lasting success. Real and lasting success needs innovation and hard work. Just to conform does not make any sense. Through imitating others, one can only become an artisan-painter rather than an artist; without any innovation, a scientific worker can never be acknowledged as a scientist.
ü Likewise, no one can "get rich" in business merely conform to the existing practices.
ü However, what I mentioned above does not mean that conventions have no value at all. We should not only know the conventions but also have a deep insight of it, thus getting the information of the domain that indicates what kind of innovation can be made and how make.
1, Eternal truths will be neither true nor eternal unless they have fresh meaning for every new social situation. (Franklin Roosevelt, American president)
2, Growth and change are the law of all life. Yesterday&aposs answers are inadequate for today&aposs problems ----just as the solutions of today will not fill the needs of tomorrow. (Franklin Roosevelt, American president)
以上是两个很有用的名言!都是Franklin Roosevelt:As President Franklin Roosevelt said, “…”
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