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GMAT考试作文机经AA部分 12月16日更新(三十).

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  以下是2011年12月的GMAT作文AA部分机经更新,更新日期从12月1日起至12月16日,目前共43题。澳际留学祝大家GMAT考试顺利!

  29. V1 by 小范1127 AA 说一个城看到杂志上的健身照片是用了某某machine。。所以为了maximize the fitness of residents in the town,新的社区center,要引进这些机器

  V2 by amyyueyue AA:是说有本fitness magazine上面刊登了一个图片上面介绍说使用这个运动machine的人肌肉线条都很好。就说为了提高全镇人民的fitness的水平,所以fitness centre全部都要equip这种machine

  考古:

  原题:62. The following appeared in the letters-to-the-editor section of a local newspaper.

  “Muscle Monthly, a fitness magazine that regularly features pictures of bodybuilders using state-of-the-art exercise machines, frequently sells out, according to the owner of Skyview Newsstand. To help maximize fitness levels in our town&aposs residents, we should, therore, equip our new community fitness center with such machines.”

  思路:

  @ 杂志和健身中心的marketing strategy不同,不能简单apply杂志的经验,况且人们买杂志可能不是因为器材而是因为上面的运动员

  @ 作者将健身视为强身健体的唯一途径,但其实慢跑、游泳等都可以强身健体,而且更便宜

  @ 这些健身器材的质量未经过检验,值得怀疑

  # 如果杂志卖光得快不一定是因为这个器材好,很可能是价钱便宜,和其他的内容。

  # 那些人很可能并不真正用这些机器,而只是摆出造型。

  # 如果是为了body-building的机器很可能不能fitness。比如,cardiovascular fitness。

  * The bodybuilders may just pretend to be using the state-of-the-art exercise machines while, in fact, their excellent body conditions are due to the use of other types of equipment. And, they just do so for the advertisement purpose.

  * The circulation is just one of the indicators of the popularity of the magazine. What is more, I can find no direct relationship between the popularity of the magazine and the author&aposs suggestion that we should equip the community with the state-of-the-art excercise machine.

  * The machines for body building will not necessarily have the same fect on fitness.

  范文:

  In this argument the author concludes that the new community fitness center should be equipped with the state-of-the-art exercise machines featured in Muscle Monthly magazine. In support of this recommendation two reasons are offered: (1) Muscle Monthly contains pictures of bodybuilders using such machines, and (2) Muscle Monthly is a popular magazine, as evidenced by the fact that it frequently sells out at the local newsstand. This argument is questionable on two counts.

  First, a major implication of the argument is that the bodybuilders pictured using the machines in Muscle Monthly magazine reached their state of fitness as a result of using these machines. The only evidence offered to support this contention, however, is the pictures in the magazine. It is possible that the bodybuilders pictured use different equipment for their workouts and are merely posing with the machines for advertising purposes.

  Second, the author assumes that machines that are suitable for bodybuilding will also be suitable to help maximize the fitness levels of the town’s residents. This assumption is highly questionable. Machines designed to increase muscle development are significantly different from those designed to increase cardiovascular fitness. Consequently, it is unlikely that the machines pictured in the magazine will be of much use to help maximize the fitness levels of the town’s residents.

  In conclusion, this argument is unconvincing. To strengthen the argument the author would have to show that the bodybuilders pictured using the exercise machines actually used the machines to reach their level of muscle development. Additionally, the author would have to show that the machines were suitable for increasing the fitness levels of the persons using them.

  以上就是12月16日更新的GMAT作文机经AA部分,考生可以适当借鉴,并通过练习来掌握GMAT作文的解题规律,从而顺利通过GMAT考试。 相关链接

1.GMAT考试作文机经AA部分 12月16日更新(二十九)

2.GMAT考试作文机经AA部分 12月16日更新(二十八)

3.GMAT考试作文机经AA部分 12月16日更新(二十七)

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