GMAT考试作文机经AA部分 5月8日更新（四）.

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　　4.(1次)

　　原始寂静：

　　V1(BY: heye227): 一个Tire company的HR经理建议：原来的traning program很花钱和时间。现在在Fun Toys 这家公司里，采用了学徒制的方法，就是对新进的员工，让高级员工去叫他们。这样可以节省花费和时间，同时可以让这些员工从高级员工那里学习工作habbits and activities。所以这种方法也应该被这个tire company效仿。

　　考古：

　　V1. Afun toys company successfully use the module which that senior employees take on an aprrence,让新员工观察老员工然后从中学习. 这样的话可以减少很多cost for training program。有人建议他们的公司应该学习这个fun toys company.

　　V2. The cost of training the new employee plays an important role in the overall expense of a company. 象the Fun Toys Company 发起一个Apprentice Training Progam. 他们给senior empoloyee发 salary bounus 如果他们自愿参加这个项目。在这个项目中new employee can learn business patterns from the senior employee这样来降低新员工的培训成本。 so no more expensive and cost programs are needed. 所以我们公司也应该象FUN Toys Company 一样用这中项目降低新员工培训的成本。”

　　V3. A fun toys company sussully use the module which that senior employees take on an aprrence,让新员工观察老员工然后从中学习. 这样的话可以减少很多expense time for training program。有人建议他们的公司应该学习这个fun toys company.

　　V4. 一个公司要省新员工培训费，决定让老员工参加一个program，记录他们的habits and activities,让新员工follow，以省去高昂的cost

　　V5. 培训员工很费钱，一个玩具商店取消了员工培训，让员工自己向老员工学习，但是有技能的员工有奖励，所以作者的公司也想这么干。

　　V6. Fun Toy Company采取了一个职工培训计划program，让senior employees volunteer to take an new employees as their apprentice, 这样的话，new employees 就可以follow the pattern sets by the senior employees. 用这种方法， 可以减少培训成本，也不会time-consuming。因此，我们公司也应该仿效该公司，采取同样的方法来培训员工。

　　参考思路：

　　1. 老员工的不一定适合新员工，时代在变化。

　　2. 没有考虑cost-fect analysis. 在这个项目实施过程中，给老员工发的salary bonus 可能大于省下的training cost。

　　3. 并且在学习过程中，新员工可能会学到老员工的一些坏习惯，比如错误操作等。

　　4. 在Apprentice Training Program中新员工只能学到专业技能，操作，但是对团队协作力，团队建设等没有很好的培训到。

　　七宗罪思路：

　　1. False casual relationship :学徒制不一定减少费用和时间

　　2.错误类比：玩具公司和该公司不一定一样

　　3.either-or choice

　　5.(1次)

　　原始寂静：

　　V1(BY: 一分流水): 一个F地方的bank propose a memo: 决定要不要给一个新开的冰淇淋店贷款。 其中说cold weather means slow ice-cream sales. 尽管F 有100，000人而且只有XXX一家冰淇淋店，去年在没有competition的情况下net revenues decreased by 10%.

　　原题：

　　The following appeared as part of a memorandum from the loan department of the Frostbite National Bank:

　　“We should not approve the business loan application of the local group that wants to open a franchise outlet for the Kool Kone chain of ice cream parlors. Frostbite is known for its cold winters, and cold weather can mean slow ice cream sales. For example, even though Frostbite is a town of 10,000 people, it has only one ice cream spot—the Frigid Cow. Despite the lack of competition, the Frigid Cow’s net revenues fell by 10 percent last winter.”

　　Frostbite国家银行的借贷部门的备忘录：

　　我们不应该批准那个希望开一家KK冰激凌连锁店的特许店的本地团体的借贷请求。Frostbite以其寒冷的冬天而闻名，而冷天气意味着冰激凌的销售不利。比如，虽然Frostbite是个有10000人的镇子，它却只有一家冰激凌店Frigid Cow。尽管缺乏竞争，Frigid Cow的净收入去年冬天下降了10%。

　　参考思路：

　　1. Other factors in deciding whether to give loan to a company such as the credit of the company should be considered.

　　2. Admittedly, the former and prospective performance of the company is also important when the bank has to make decision of whether or not should it give loan to a company. However, the author of the memorandum shows no sufficient evidence to support his or her proposal that the bank should not give loan to Kool Kone chain of ice cream parlors.

　　3. The statistics last year does not necessarily denote the future trend.

　　七宗罪思路：

　　1. False casual relationship :天气寒冷和冰激凌销售无因果关系

　　2. All things are equal：用之前数据决定以后的决策不正确

　　3.Insufficient sample:除了销量，还应该考虑市场前景，消费者喜好等因素决定贷款

　　参考范文：

　　In this memorandum the loan department of Frostbite National Bank recommends against approval of a business loan to a local group that wants to open an ice cream parlor. In support of this decision the loan department points out that Frostbite has a reputation for cold winters and sales of ice cream decrease in cold weather. This latter point is buttressed by the fact that Frostbite’s only ice cream parlor suffered a 10 percent decline in net revenues the previous winter. The loan department’s decision is questionable for the following reasons.

　　To begin with, since it is reasonable to expect a decline in ice cream sales during winter months, it is difficult to assess the relevance of the fact that Frostbite has cold winters to the potential success of the Kool Kone franchise. Common sense suggests that this fact would be significant only if it turned out that Frostbite’s winter season lasted 9 or 10 months as it does in arctic regions. In that case slow sales could be expected for most of the year and the loan department’s opposition to the loan would be readily understandable. If, on the other hand, Frostbite’s winter season lasts only a few months and the remainder of the year is warm or hot, it is difficult to comprehend the loan department’s reasoning.

　　Next, the loan department assumes that the Frigid Cow’s decline in net revenue last winter was a result of slow sales occasioned by cold weather. While this is a possible reason for the decline, it is not the only factor that could account for it. For example, other factors such as poor business practices or lack of inventory could be responsible for the Frigid Cow’s loss of revenue. The loan department’s failure to investigate or even consider these and other possible explanations for the Frigid Cow’s decline in revenue renders their decision highly suspect.

　　In conclusion, the loan department’s decision is ill-founded. To better evaluate the decision, we would need to know more about the length and severity of Frostbite’s winter season. Moreover, evidence would have to be provided to support the assumption that the Frigid Cow’s loss of revenue last winter was a direct result of the cold weather.

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