GMAT考试作文机经AI部分 5月7日更新（十二）.

　 GMAT考试已于2012年5月4日更换题库，这是旧的GMAT考试最后一次换库了，这也是GMAT作文AI部分的最后一次换库了。新的GMAT考试将于6月份于大家见面，而AI作文将被删除。因此，希望参加最后一次旧GMAT的考生好好努力，争取旗开得胜！以下是2012年5月的GMAT作文AI部分机经更新，更新日期从12年5月7日开始！

　　18.(2次)

　　原始寂静：

　　V1(BY: 简奕) Is physical activities more important than academic.

　　考古：

　　V1. Physical activity and sports are as important to students&apos education as academics.

　　V2. physical activities are as important as academics.

　　V3. 对学生来说体育锻炼和知识一样重要

　　参考思路：

　　l Partially agree. 体育锻炼对于人很重要，但是对于大多数普通的学生来说，其重要性没有专业课学习来的重要。(less important than professional study for the majority of students, except for those who have a talent for sports and want to become a professional athletes in the future.)

　　l 适量的体育运动(appropriate physical activities)有益于(benicial to)身体健康(healthy)，能够帮助学生提高大脑的记忆能力、反应速度(Improve the mental faculty of retaining and recalling past experience ; enhance the ability to perceive and respond quickly)。(一个试验，说不运动只读书的人的大脑记忆能力比较差poor memory, 而对照组中In the controls, 大脑的记忆能力与体育锻炼的多少呈正比例关系。)所以体育锻炼很重要，不能被忽视。

　　l 但是对于大多数学生而言，体育运动虽然重要，仍然只能排在学习之后，只能适量锻炼。

　　1) 学生的主要职责是学习，为了将来进入社会工作做准备。公司不会因为你体育很好而录用你。

　　2) 过度的体育运动会影响学习，因为会消耗很大的体能(consume/exhaust all our energy)。

　　l 反对者会说，体育锻炼和运动同样重要，是因为体育运动能够保证我们长寿、更好的生活的前提。但是这一点不能泯灭学习对于生活的重要性，没有学习就等于没有工作，没有工作就要饿死，还谈什么身体健康?因此，从重要性来说，还是学习更加重要一点，锻炼排在第二。

　　19.(1次)(待确认)

　　原始寂静：

　　V1(BY: 秋千划水) 为了改善旧有事物要打破一尘不变的旧有事物

　　原题：

　　原题：No one can possibly achieve any real and lasting success or ‘get rich’ in business by conforming to conventional practices or ways of thinking.

　　参考思路：

　　Thesis sentence: Whether a conformist can achieve lasting success or "get rich" in business depends primarily on the type of business involved. Iconoclasts rise to the top in newer industries and in those where consumer demand is in constant flux. Conformists ultimately prevail, however, in traditional service industries ensconced in systems and regulations.

　　View1: In consumer-driven industries, innovation, product differentiation, and creativity are crucial to lasting success

　　Evidence: retail and media sectors. And in technology, companies that fail to break away from last year&aposs paradigm are soon lt behind by the competition.

　　View2: However, in traditional service industries—such as finance, accounting, insurance, legal services, and health care—lasting success and riches come not to nonconformists but rather to those who can deliver services most fectively within the confines of established practices, policies, and regulations.

　　Evidence: Citibank gain high reputation for its insistence in comprehensively considerate services

　　感谢zjnzjn 提供观点：

　　innovation点：大多数都着力于如何在既有的基础上做到更加ficient，然而一个更好的strategy就是differentiation，用另一种不同的角度：例子，当大家都在想如何把CD做得更好的时候，有人推出了MP3，CD瞬间被邈。。。

　　创新的重要性：侧面看，很多的学校都推出了和innovation有关的课程，从另一方面表明了当今社会business world对创新的重视。别人有，你没有，没有立足之地

　　convention点：不能老天马行空的想idea，也要脚踏实地。例子：寂静里的一篇阅读：一个厂老想着如何innovation，不生产，结果技术成熟了生产跟不上。。

　　A conformist can achieve any real success especially lasting success. Real and lasting success needs innovation and hard work. Just to conform does not make any sense. Through imitating others, one can only become an artisan-painter rather than an artist; without any innovation, a scientific worker can never be acknowledged as a scientist.

　　Likewise, no one can "get rich" in business merely conform to the existing practices.

　　However, what I mentioned above does not mean that conventions have no value at all. We should not only know the conventions but also have a deep insight of it, thus getting the information of the domain that indicates what kind of innovation can be made and how make.

　　Eternal truths will be neither true nor eternal unless they have fresh meaning for every new social situation. (Franklin Roosevelt, American president)

　　Growth and change are the law of all life. Yesterday&aposs answers are inadequate for today&aposs problems ----just as the solutions of today will not fill the needs of tomorrow. (Franklin Roosevelt, American president)

　　以上是两个很有用的名言!都是Franklin Roosevelt：As President Franklin Roosevelt said, “…”

　　的确在很多情况下，merely!!遵循旧的方法，很难保持long-lasting success。在很多consumer-driven industries, 顾客们追求innovative and different products。比如，一个it is ridiculous for a abacus manufactory cannot compete with the calculator factory by producing better abaci. 必须创新，才能keep up with the development of the market.

　　但是在有一些为了financial achievement的一些business principles. 比方说，a, 追求ficiency, 降低cost是永恒的需要——所以要追求新技术，创造不同的产品;b, 比如保持企业的reputation，吸引充足的consumer. ——制造质量好的产品。c, 企业作为社会的一分子，不能单纯地追求利益最大化，也应该carry some responsibility for the whole community。

　　参考范文：

　　Whether a conformist can achieve lasting success or “get rich” in business depends primarily on the type of business involved. Iconoclasts rise to the top in newer industries and in those where consumer demand is in constant flux. Conformists ultimately prevail, however, in traditional service industries ensconced in systems and regulations.

　　In consumer-driven industries, innovation, product differentiation, and creativity are crucial to lasting success, in the retail and media sectors, for example, unconventional products and advertising are necessary to catch the attention of consumers and to keep up with the vagaries of consumer tastes. Those who take an iconoclastic approach tend to recognize emerging trends and to rise above their peers. For example, Ted Turner’s departure from the traditional format of the other television networks, and the responsiveness of Amazon.com to burgeoning Internet commerce, propelled these two giants to leadership positions in their industries. And in technology, where there are no conventional practices or ways of thinking to begin with, companies that fail to break away from last year’s paradigm are soon lt behind by the competition.

　　However, in traditional service industries—such as finance, accounting, insurance, legal services, and health care—lasting success and riches (pl. 财富, 财产) come not to nonconformists but rather to those who can deliver services most fectively within the confines of established practices, policies, and regulations. Of course, a clever idea for structuring a deal, or a creative legal maneuver, may play a role in winning smaller battles along the way. But such tactics are those of conformists who are playing by the same ground rules (程序, [运动]体育场馆的运动章程) as their peers; winners are just better at the game.

　　In conclusion, while non-conformists tend to be the wildly successful players in technology-driven and consumer-driven industries, traditionalists are the winners in system-driven industries pervaded by policy, regulation, and bureaucracy.

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