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  GMAT作文机经一向重复率比较高,而且一个月内的GMAT作文机经数量也颇为有限,这对很多不是很擅长作文的考生来说无疑是个福音,只要考生能够对于考前一个月内的作文机经都有所了解,并背诵一定数量的作文模版,相信GMAT作文高分完全由可能实现。

  出口糖解决财政赤字

  OG12 40

  The following appeared as part of an article in a weekly newsmagazine.

  “The country of Sacchar can best solve its current trade dicit problem by lowering the price of sugar, its primary export. Such an action would make Sacchar better able to compete for markets with other sugar-exporting countries. The sales of Sacchar’s sugar abroad would increase, and this increase would substantially reduce Sacchar’s trade dicit.’

  参考思路

  1比起价格下降而带来的损失产量提高的影响是不是更大不是定数Increasing sales by lowering the price of sugar will not yield an increase in income unless the increase in sales is sufficient to overcome the loss in income due to the lower price. in the absence of ...

  2可能性价比本来就很有竞争力了不需要降价,也可能价格已经很低了没有降低的空间了

  3降低进口可能是一个更好的办法A trade-dicit occurs when a country spends more on imports than it earns from exports. However, the author provides no evidence that substantiates this assumption. It is possible that revenues from imports will increase dramatically in the near future; if so, the course of action proposed by the author might be unnecessary to solve Sacchar&aposs trade dicit problem. To the extent that the case...

  参考范文

  The author of this article argues that the country of Sacchar can best solve its current trade dicit problem by lowering the price of its main export, sugar. The line of reasoning is that this action would make Sacchar more competitive with other sugar-exporting countries, thereby increasing sales of Sacchar’s sugar abroad and, in turn, substantially reducing the trade-dicit. This line of reasoning is unconvincing for a couple of reasons.

  In the first place, this argument is based on an oversimplified analysis of the trade dicit problem Sacchar currently faces. A trade-dicit occurs when a country spends more on imports than it earns from exports. The author’s argument relies on the assumption that earnings from imports will remain constant. However, the author provides no evidence that substantiates this assumption. It is possible that revenues from imports will increase dramatically in the near future; if so, the course of action proposed by the author might be unnecessary to solve Sacchar’s trade dicit problem. Conversely, it is possible that revenues from imports are likely to decrease dramatically in the near future. To the extent that this is the case, lowering sugar prices may have a negligible countervailing fect, depending on the demand for Sacchar’s sugar.

  In the second place, increasing sales by lowering the price of sugar will not yield an increase in income unless the increase in sales is sufficient to overcome the loss in income due to the lower price. This raises three questions the author fails to address. First, will a price decrease in fact stimulate demand? Second, is demand sufficient to meet the increase in supply? Third, can Sacchar increase the sugar production sufficiently to overcome the dicit? In the absence of answers to these questions, we cannot assess the author’s proposal.

  In conclusion, the author provides an incomplete analysis of the problem and, as a result, provides a questionable solution. To better evaluate the proposal, we would need to know how revenues from imports are likely to change in the future. To strengthen the argument, the author must provide evidence that demand is sufficient to meet the proposed increase in supply, and that Sacchar has sufficient resources to accommodate the increase.

  从这篇GMAT作文机经中,我们可以看出范文采用标准的四段题,结构严谨,且通篇中每一个小观点后都会辅以几句论证,同时句式结构适中,并没有太过于复杂的语法结构,因此拿到GMAT作文满分也显得很自然了。

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