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七月第四篇(五月第十七篇)
建gym,减少医疗成本, balance budget(hcaelb2000 solipsism00)
【原始】
一个memo,讲的是一个manager给当地的municipal concil的建议:调查表明多运动的人明显比不运动的人少去医院,所以给concil的employee新建一个gym可以明显减少医疗保险成本,从而达到concil所预期的balance budget
【考古】The following appeared in a memo to the Saluda town council from the town’s business manager.
“Research indicates that those who exercise regularly are hospitalized less than half as often as those who don’t exercise. By providing a well-equipped gym for Saluda’s municipal employees, we should be able to reduce the cost of our group health insurance coverage by approximately 50% and thereby achieve a balanced town budget.”
【思路】
1. 建造体育馆的话费可能会超过insurance上省下来的钱,带来给的负债。
2. 建造好了,municipal employees也不一定去。或是,现在的municipal 是不是已经很健康,不需要gym。
3. Survey这个可信度。Less than half怎么得出的,取样是否有代表性?
4. 现在insurance 这么高,病人这么多是不是有他因:环境污染。建造体育馆能否达到预期效果
【范文】In this memo Saluda’s business manager recommends that the town provide a gym for its employees as a means of balancing the town’s budget. The manager reasons that since studies show that people who exercise regularly are hospitalized less than half as often than those who don’t exercise, Saluda could save approximately 50% on the cost of its group health insurance coverage by providing its employees with a well-equipped gym. The savings on insurance would balance the town’s budget. The manager’s argument is unconvincing because it rests on several unsupported and dubious assu
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