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7月13日GMAT机经换库了,现在就由小编来为大家整理七月份的GMAT作文机经整理,下面是关于GMAT作文机经的相关问题,分享给大家,希望对大家有所帮助,文中观点仅供参考。
8. 这是一篇Saluda这个地区的editorial:Saluda Consolidated High School有200多门课程,另外一家private high school只有80门课程,但是这家私立高中每年送higher proportion of graduates进大学。
所以建议Consolidated High School cut at least half the number of its courses and focus on the routine curriculum, thereby improving student performance and saving tax dollars.
错误还是比较明显的:1.higher proportion不证明这家学校的学生就比Consolidated表现好; 2. 没有证明better performance和number of courses有联系。3. 这家成功了不见得另一家就得成功。
The following appeared in an editorial from a newspaper serving the town of Saluda:
“The Saluda Consolidated High School offers more than 200 different courses from which its students can choose. A much smaller private school down the street offers a basic curriculum of only 80 different courses, but it consistently sends a higher proportion of its graduating seniors on to college than Consolidated does. By eliminating at least half of the courses offered there and focusing on a basic curriculum, we could improve student performance at Consolidated and also save many tax dollars.”
1) Gratuitous assumption 无关假设
(number of courses 和 better performance )
2. False causal relationship
(the proportion of students is a overall measure of student performance)
1) 错误类比
(一家私立学校成功,不代表你也能成功)
以上就是对于7月GMAT作文机经的相关介绍,希望对大家备考GMAT考试有所帮助,文中观点仅供参考。
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