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9月GMAT作文机经:两个城市开shopping mall.

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  9月GMAT机经换库了,现在就由小编来为大家整理九月份的GMAT作文机经整理,下面是关于GMAT作文机经的相关问题,分享给大家,希望对大家有所帮助,文中观点仅供参考。

  【本月原始】

  作者说last year the construction of a new shopping mall in Owl City downtown之后,local business closing, shortage of parking lot, increase arrests, vagrancy in the nearby park也变多了。所以Elm City一定要deny the application of the construction of a new shopping mall in its downtown.

  【8月考古】

  The following editorial appeared in the Elm City paper:

  “The construction last year of a shopping mall in downtown Oak City was a mistake. Since the mall has opened, a number of local businesses have closed, and the downtown area suffers from an acute parking shortage, and arrests for crime and vagrancy have increased in the nearby Oak City Park. Elm City should pay attention to the example of the Oak City mall and deny the application to build a shopping mall in Elm City.”

  Discuss how well reasoned . . . etc.

  去年在橡树城市中心修建购物中心是个错误。由于中心开业,大量的本地企业倒闭了。而且市中心受到严重缺乏停车位的困扰。在附近的橡树城公园拘捕的罪犯和流浪汉也增加了。榆树城应该注意橡树城购物中心的例子并防止在榆树城建立购物中心。

  1) 错误因果关系

  The social problems are increased after the new shopping mall is open.

  有其他原因,比如政府疏于监管、

  The construction of shopping mall caused the social problem

  2) 错误类别

  一个城市的结果 不能说明另一个城市不能开shopping mall

  3) 看问题太片面

  The author only focus on negative fect, 而忽略了其他好处,比如增加就业率,增加政府税收。

  以上就是对于9月GMAT作文机经的相关介绍,希望对大家备考GMAT考试有所帮助,文中观点仅供参考。

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