2月GMAT作文机经：公司搬去the city of Helios.

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　　，希望大家能感受到这股暖意，并把它化为能量，在GMAT考试的道路上勇往直前。

　　【原始】

　　貌似是在给the city of Helios 做广告。

　　说那些想要寻找机会并且想要寻找新的地点投资设厂的corparation要注意了。the city of Helios会是你们的一

　　个很好地选择，因为它在经济不景气的那些年里依然保持the unemployment rate low。另外现在该市还有许多政

　　策吸引那些focus on the research of the innovation technologies 的公司.

　　【考古】

　　V1 一个regional life的magazine的article里面有段话，说corporation都应该去Helios 这个城市找new

　　business opportunity或者new location。因为之前recession的时候Helios的unemployment rate was lower

　　than regional average。且过去很多年Helios 都是industrial 中心。说现在Helios为了expand economy base要

　　引进research and development new technology的公司。

　　楼主由于昨儿没寂静 吓得凌晨2am才休息，本来就才6小时基本上没睡着。。看这个题目比较晕乎。。。只写了时

　　间上的(过去好不等于未来好)还有说unemployment rate 关是否适合new business 啥事。很可能一开始

　　unemployment rate就很低，所以即使这个城市其实失业率increase sharply最后还是低于average，但是实际上整

　　个经济已经不好了。而这个城市之所以要招商很可能要么发展到了瓶颈要么已经开始下坡了，所以才要招商。最后

　　建议好歹给一点关于这个城市未来发展预测的数据。(by: 昆仑飞)

　　V2 (疑似原题!) The following appeared as part of an article in a magazine devoted to regional

　　life.

　　“Corporations should look to the city of Helios when seeking new business opportunities or a new

　　location. Even in the recent recession, Helios’s unemployment rate was lower than the regional

　　average. It is the industrial center of the region, and historically it has provided more than its

　　share of the region’s manufacturing jobs. In addition, Helios is attempting to expand its economic

　　base by attracting companies that focus on research and development of innovative technologies.”(感

　　谢wangxin1129 ?)

　　【参考范文】

　　In this argument corporations are urged to consider the city of Helios when seeking a new location

　　or new business opportunities. To support this recommendation, the author points out that Helios is

　　the industrial center of the region, providing most of the region’s manufacturing jobs and enjoying

　　a lower-than-average unemployment rate. Moreover, it is argued, forts are currently underway to

　　expand the economic base of the city by attracting companies that focus on research and development

　　of innovative technologies. This argument is problematic for two reasons.

　　To begin with, it is questionable whether the available labor pool in Helios could support all types

　　of corporations. Given that Helios has attracted mainly industrial and manufacturing companies in

　　the past, it is unlikely that the local pool of prospective employees would be suitable for

　　corporations of other types. For example, the needs of research and development companies would not

　　be met by a labor force trained in manufacturing skills. For this reason, it’s unlikely that Helios

　　will be successful in its attempt to attract companies that focus on research and development of

　　innovative technologies.

　　Another problem with the available work force is its size. Due to the lower than average

　　unemployment rate in Helios, corporations that require large numbers of workers would not find

　　Helios attractive. The fact that few persons are out of work suggests that new corporations will

　　have to either attract new workers to Helios or pay the existing workers higher wages in order to

　　lure them away from their current jobs. Neither of these alternatives seems enticing to companies

　　seeking to relocate.

　　In conclusion, the author has not succeeded in providing compelling reasons for selecting Helios as

　　the site for a company wishing to relocate. In fact, the reasons offered function better as reasons

　　for not relocating to Helios. Nor has the author provided compelling reasons for companies seeking

　　new business opportunities to choose Helios.

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