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买房比买股票好
本月原始
考的说股票近几年表现很差,一直在跌。但是楼市表现却很好,建议投资者从股市转到投资房地产。
解题思路:
1)股票是可以做空的,虽然在跌,反向卖空就可以获利;与股市相关的股指期货是可以使用杠杆的,提高收益率
2)股票的流动性比房市的好,套现容易。楼市的收益必须减去其相应的流动性风险才是真实收益率。
3)股票的进入门槛低,楼市门槛高,不是每个人都充足资金买。
4)过去几年股市收益不好不代表未来的也不好。——winowc
考古
V1 by 开心的柠檬
average prices of investing a home are increasing over the past five years, while average prices of investing in national stock market are declined in the past. So the residents should invest in a home instead of invest in national stock market. Since residents who invest in a home would 坐在家里就享受到房子增值的好处,提升生活质量,而投资股票却不能这样。Therore, residents should invest in a home. 我写了时地全等(五年过去不代表现在);二者择一(可以用a mixed investment strategy);无端假设(投资股票不能提高生活质量);现在想想还能写一个,如果大家都投资房产,那么房产价格可能会不升反跌。
V2 By hellomorning
AWA:在一本Real Estate Brochure上有一段论述,说在过去的五年这个城市中的房价已经翻倍,而股市价格却下跌了,因此城市里的居民应该把投资在股市里的钱拿出来买房,人们住在自己拥有的房子中,不仅能够享受到房产增值带来的投资收益,而且Quality of life也会比把钱投入股市时要好。所以,All the Residents should invest their money into a home.
V3 There is a steady decline of stock market in recent five years, so experts suggest that people should invest their money on the housing market rather than the stock market. The housing can bring benit for investors because the better performance of the housing market, besides, the house can bring the investors more tangible benit because people who own those houses can live in it.
V4 (感谢wanyanruiyun确认为原题!)Now is the perfect time to buy a house in our city. Over the past five years, average home prices in our region have nearly doubled. But average stock prices in the national stock market have actually declined over the same period. So homeowners have seen an increase in value for their housing investment during the last five years that far exceeds what they could have made by investing in the stock market. Our city’s residents can surely achieve a similar profit over the nest five years. Furthermore, if residents invest in a home, they can enjoy the use of the home while its value increases, whereas money invested in stocks would not contribute to their quality of life in the same way that owning a home would. Therore, all the residents of our city should invest their money in a home
参考思路
1.All things equal :五年前的情况 现在可能变化很大, 股票随着很多因素的改变
2.错误因果关系:买房子不一定赚钱,人们买房子的目的,住而不是投资。类比错误。即使投资,房子的价格也没有给出,是不是大家买得起。买股票多少钱都可以投资
3.无根据假设:rich and quality of life
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