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　　作文题目是：

　　"In order for any work of art- for example, a film, a novel, a poem or a song - to have merit, it must be understandable to most people."Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the tatement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

　　文章全文如下(考生原创回忆)：

　　Art usually sounds to be far away from the daily life of ordinary people. And it is tempting to believe the statement that people are supposed to fully understand the form of art bore they are able to grasp the essence of the work of art. How could a masterpiece of art be appreciated and expose its merit if it is puzzling and complex to most people? However, the significance of art lies in its free spirit and unfettered inspiration of the creators instead of catering to the aesthetic taste of most people.

　　Art&aposs importance cannot be exaggerated too much. People are capable of finding comfort and tranquility from a song or a poem when they are upset or tortured by the cruel reality of the world. Owing to the limit of money, time, energy and so on and so forth, it is unlikely for ordinary people to experience different kinds of life, nevertheless,we are able to devote ourselves to a totally different world and go through exotic or romantic , charming or wretched experiences by devouring novels. Only when people have a command of the essence of art can they admire the work of art with heart and soul and share the spirit perception with other people.

　　It is agreeable for the person who is in want of appreciating the beauty and wonder of the works of art finds these masterpieces easily accessible to ordinary people. Nonetheless, being understandable to most people is not the prerequisite of art to be meaningful to the world. For instance, one of a famous book of James Joyce, Ulysses, is well-known for its complexity and intricacy for the skill of stream-of-consciousness being employed throughout the whole novel.Even some intellectual admits that the novel is inaccessible to some extent, let alone most ordinary people. The novel is regarded as one of the masterpiece in the history of literature. The convoluted plots and the abundant symbolic meaning of the objects in the novel strengthen the unique place of the novel and stimulate myriads of literature scholars to explore the novel instead of impairing its merit. Another example to opposing the statement is Emily Dickinson,the secluded but famous American poet, who wrote her poem with cunningness and meaning images that are not easily understood by most people. It is said Walt Whitman was deeply influenced by Emily Dickinson and composed his own work - song of Myself. Beyond that,opera, considered to be a elegant form of art, can be truly appreciated only the recipients focus on listening it and perceiving it.

　　In the final analysis, it is unnecessary to make sure every work of art are accessible to most people, for the creators have right to create the art as they desire to do, so do the people have the right to choose what they prer. Russell has pointed out that the essence of happiness lies in the diversity of the world.

　　一篇成功的Issue作文必须要做到文章结构、思想和逻辑以及语言的三过关。这篇Issue作品基本都做到了。

　　首先，考生的观点/立场是鲜明而独到的。在文章开头段的末尾，考生在稍作让步后，很快就明白地亮明了自己的全文立场："the significance of art lies in its free spirit and unfettered inspiration of the creators instead of catering to the aesthetic taste of most People ."考生对艺术功能的定义(the significance of art lies in its free spirit and unfettered inspiration)显然很有新意。一看知道，这就不是纯粹“模板”，考生有自己的独立思考。

　　然后，考生在正文部分，利用两个意群段表述了自己的两个分论点，分别是第二段的"Art&aposs importance cannot be exaggerated too much"和第三段的"being understandable to most people is not the prerequisite of art to be meaningful to the world"，接下来对这两个分论点的论证也可谓充实。第二个自然段(也就是第一个分论点)主要从常识(Common sense)的角度来论证;而第三个自然段(也就是第二个分论点)则主要采用例证的手法。考生的例证非常精彩，选用的例子典型、精当，例子和观点的相互佐证也分析得非常明晰，有极强的说服力。

　　该考生文章的结尾也符合我一贯推崇的特点，即，文章的结尾务求“短、有趣、留有余味”。考生对罗素观点的引用"the essence of happiness lies in the diversity of the world"颇有意味。

　　看得出来，该考生考试一开始也有点儿慌张，以至于考生的首段前两句话(Art usually sounds to be far away from the daily life of ordinary people. And it is tempting to believe the statement that people are supposed to fully understand the form of art bore they are able to grasp the essence of the work of art.)显得用词拖沓且表意似有模糊。但在整理出自己的中心思想后，考生显然找到了状态，表述越来越流畅，思路展开和论证也更得心应手了。

　　最后说明的是，这篇文章的字数达到了489个字!这是个很难能可贵的数量。它充分说明了一点：缩短的Issue写作时间不是问题!只要我们对题目做到思路清晰、论证饱满，充分发挥出自己既有的语言实力，写出佳作完全可能。

　　以上便是名师点评的考生的GRE Issue，希望考生看了之后有所启示，结合自己的情况改正缺点，发扬优势，争取在新GRE Issue写作上得高分!

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