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题目题材:商业
gre argument1题目:
The following appeared in a memorandum written by the vice president of Nature&aposs Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products.
"Previous experience has shown that our stores are most profitable in areas where residents are highly concerned with leading healthy lives (6). We should therore build our next new store in Plainsville (5), which has many such residents (8). Plainsville merchants report that sales of running shoes and exercise clothing are at all-time highs (1). The local health club, which nearly closed five years ago due to lack of business, has more members than ever, and the weight training and aerobics classes are always full(2,7). We can even anticipate a new generation of customers: Plainsville&aposs schoolchildren are required to participate in a &aposfitness for life&apos program, which emphasizes the benits of regular exercise at an early age (3, 4)."
gre argument1提纲:
(1)Strong sales of exercise apparel do not necessarily indicate that Plainesville residents would be interested in NW&aposs products, or that these residents are interested in exercising.
(2)The popularity of the local health club is little indication that the residents in Plainsville live much healthier lives now, and that NW will earn a profit from a store in Plainesville.
(3)The memo contains no evidence to support the assumption that people who exercise regularly are also interested in buying health food and health-related products.
(4)The fact that a certain fitness program is mandatory for Plainesville&aposs schoolchildren accomplishes nothing toward bolstering the recommendation.
(5)The arguer does not provide any information regarding the cost of building such a new store thus we can not be convinced that the new store will be profitable.
(6)The arguer fails to consider other possible factors besides residents&aposinterest in healthy lives that may contribute to the success of their existing stores.
(7)The recommendation fails to substantiate that this interest will continue in the foreseeable future.
(8)The arguer unfairly assumes that Plainesville residents will prer NW over other merchants that sell similar products.
注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。
无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。
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