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题目题材:生产劳动安全
gre argument 12题目:
The following appeared in a memo from a vice president of Alta Manufacturing.
"During the past year, Alta Manufacturing had thirty percent more on-the-job accidents(2,4) than nearby Panoply Industries, where the work shifts are one hour shorter than ours(5). Experts believe that a significant contributing factor in many on-the-job accidents is fatigue and sleep deprivation among workers. Therore, to reduce the number of on-the-job accidents at Alta(6) and thereby increase productivity(1), we should shorten each of our three work shifts by one hour so that our employees will get adequate amounts of sleep(3)."
gre argument 12提纲:
(1)The president provides no evidence that overall worker productivity is attributable in part to the number of on-the-job accidents.
(2)The president assumes that some accidents at Alta are caused by fatigue or sleep deprivation.
(3)The assumption that Alta&aposs workers would use the additional hour of free time to sleep or rest is open to doubt.
(4)The president fails to consider that the per-worker accident rate might reveal that Alta is actually safer than Panoply, depending on the total number of workers at each company.
(5)The president fails to consider possible differences between Alta and Panoply which render them incomparable.
(6)Merely shortening the work shifts might not suffice to reduce the number of on-the-job accidents.
注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。
无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。
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