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题目题材:社会
题目:
The following appeared in a letter to the editor of a local newspaper from a citizen of the state of Impecunia.
"Two years ago our neighboring state, Lucria, began a state lottery to supplement tax revenues for education and public health. Today, Lucria spends more per pupil than we do, and Lucria&aposs public health program treats far more people(3,4) than our state&aposs program does(1). If we were to establish a state lottery like the one in Lucria(2), the profits could be used to improve our educational system and public health program. The new lottery would doubtless be successful, because a survey conducted in our capital city (6)concludes that citizens of Impecunia already spend an average of $50 per person per year on gambling(5)."
提纲:
(1)The arguer unfairly assumes that the current condition of education and health program in Lucria is due to the lottery.
(2)The two states may be different in many aspects, thus a similar lottery system may not prove helpful for Impecunia.
(3)We do not know the base amount of citizens in each state, hence the fact that Lucria&aposs health programs treat more people than Impecunia&aposs programs lends no support to the argument.
(4)The number of people treated by a health program does not necessarily indicate the quality of health care of the program.
(5)The fact that Impecunia&aposs residents spend $ 50 per capita on gambling each year does not suffice to prove that residents will spend much money on lottery.
(6)The situation in our capital city could not illustrate that people in other areas of the state are also interested in gambling.
注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。
无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。
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