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前段时间为gre考生汇总了gre issue写作提纲思路和分析,希望对考生在攻破greissue写作上有所帮助。接下来的几天我们将为gre考生整理gre argument部分的提纲内容。希望通过我们的整理和汇总,让gre考生真正能掌握gre写作的精髓。
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题目:
The following appeared in a letter from the manager of a rock band named Double Rice.
"One year ago, tickets for Double Rice&aposs concerts in stadiums around the country took, on average, at least 24 hours to sell out, if they sold out at all. But the band has been enjoying a surge in nationwide popularity among 14 to 25 year olds, and the 30,000 tickets for a recent concert in Megalopolis sold out in 12 minutes(4). Clearly the ticket sales in Megalopolis are a result both of the band&aposs increased popularity and of the advertising campaign run in Megalopolis by the Ad Lib advertising agency(1). Thus, in order to ensure that the band&aposs success in Megalopolis is repeated across the country, the band should hire Ad Lib to duplicate the Megalopolis ad campaign on a nationwide scale(2,3)."
提纲:
(1)The author fails to establish the causal relationship between Ad Lib’s campaign and the Megalopolis success.
(2)The manager&aposs claim that this success can be repeated elsewhere through duplicating the Megalopolis ad campaign might be unwarranted.
(3)The manager assumes that Ad Lib&aposs services are both necessary and sufficient for this purpose.
(4)The success in Megalopolis may have other causes, and is not a good indication of increased popularity of the band.
注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。
无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。
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