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gre argument44题目:
The following is a recommendation from the business manager of Monarch Books.
"Monarch Books should open a café in its store(5) to attract more customers(3) and better compete with Regal Books, which recently opened a café(1,2). Monarch, which has been in business at the same location for more than twenty years, has a large customer following because it is known for its wide selection of books on all subjects. Opening the café would clearly attract more customers. The café would require relatively little space. Space could be made for the café by discontinuing the children&aposs book section(4), which will likely become less popular(8) given that the last national census(6) indicated a significant decline in the percent of the population(7) who are under age ten."
提纲:
(1)The manager offers no evidence that the two bookstores are comparable at every aspect.
(2)We are not informed about the possible change in the profit and number of customers of Regal Books after Regal has opened the new café.
(3)No evidence could guarantee that opening a café at Monarch will attract substantially more customers.
(4)The manager fails to consider the negative fects of cutting out children’s book section and opening the café.
(5)The manager fails to consider the possible cost of opening the café.
(6)The result of a national census may not be properly applied to a certain region.
(7)Although the percent of children in the general population has declined, the total number of children may increase.
(8)Granted that the number of children who are under age ten has decreased, we can not ensure that the number of children who go to our bookstore, or the need for children’s book will also decline.
注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。
无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。
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