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题目题材:教育
gre argument 86题目:
The following appeared in a memo from a member of the Clark City School Board.
"Mason Elementary School is faced with a shortage of classroom space. At the same time, parents in our district are increasingly expressing the desire to see improvements in their children&aposs reading abilities(1). Therore, we should reduce the number of physical education classes at Mason Elementary and convert part of the gymnasium to class-room space(2,3,6). The school will gain the additional space for classrooms without the cost of extending the building and can use the time that students would have spent in physical education classes to provide more reading instruction(4). This plan will lead to improvements in students&apos reading skills(5)."
提纲:
(1)The member fails to provide any evidence to prove the necessity of fulfilling the parents’ desire.
(2)The member fails to consider the cost and negative fects of replacing physical education classes with reading instruction and converting gymnasium to classrooms.
(3)The member fails to illustrate the feasibility of converting gymnasium to class-room space.
(4)Reducing the number of physical education classes does not necessarily ensure that students will spend more total amount of time on improving reading skills.
(5)The member unfairly assumes that the proposed reading instruction will necessarily ensure improvements in students’ reading abilities.
(6)The member ignores other possible methods to gain classroom space and to improve students’ reading skills.
注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。
无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。
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