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前段时间为gre考生汇总了gre issue写作提纲思路和分析,希望对考生在攻破gre issue写作上有所帮助。接下来的几天我们将为gre考生整理gre argument部分的提纲内容。希望通过我们的整理和汇总,让gre考生真正能掌握gre写作的精髓。
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题目题材:传媒
gre argument 98题目:
The following appeared in a memo from the director of a large group of hospitals.
"In a laboratory study(1) of liquid antibacterial hand soaps, a concentrated solution of Nadasept killed 40 percent more bacteria(2) than the liquid hand soaps currently used in our hospitals. During a subsequent test of Nadasept at our hospital in Saluda, that hospital reported significantly fewer cases of patient infection(3) than did any of the other hospitals in our group(4). Therore, to prevent serious patient infections(6), we should supply Nadasept(8,9) at all(5) hand washing stations throughout our hospital system(7)."
提纲:
(1)The result of the laboratory study may not properly apply to normal hospital environment.
(2)The director fails to inform us if the bacteria killed by Nadasept are all harmful.
(3)The director unfairly assumes that it is Nadasept that resulted in the fewer cases of patient infection at the tested hospital.
(4)There may be many other differences between the tested hospital and its counterparts.
(5)The success of Nadasept at the tested hospital, if there is any, does not necessarily recur at other hospitals.
(6)The director fails to differentiate between the severity of infections at the tested hospital, thus we cannot ensure that Nadasept can fectively prevent serious infections.
(7)Granted that Nadasept is very fective in killing bacteria, the director does not demonstrate the necessity of supplying Nadasept at all our hospitals.
(8)The director overlooks other fective measures of preventing patient infections.
(9)The director fails to consider if Nadasept has any side fect.
注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。
无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。
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