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gre argument 135题目:
The following is a memorandum from the business manager of WLSS television station.
"Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints(1,4) we received from viewers were concerned with the station&aposs coverage of weather and local news(2,3). In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us(5). Therore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all(7) our news programs(6)."
提纲:
(1)The manager fails to provide the total number of complaints received bore our coverage of news were changed.
(2)The manager simply assumes that those complaints are representative of the opinions of our entire audience.
(3)The manager fails to analyze the actual attitude of our audience toward the late-night news program, the program might be welcome although there are a few complaints about it.
(4)The manager fails to inform us the details of the complaints we received, thus we cannot evaluate if these audience are dissatisfied with the quantity of weather and local news.
(5)The manager unjustifiably assumes that it is the change in our coverage of news that caused those businesses to cancel their contract with us.
(6)The manager ignores many other possible methods to attract more viewers and to increase advertising revenues.
(7)The necessity of expanding the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs is open to doubt.
注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。
无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。
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