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题目题材:社会
gre argument 175题目:
The following appeared in a letter to the school board in the town of Centerville.
"All(1) students should be required to take the driver&aposs education course at Centerville High School. In the past two years several accidents(2,3) in and around Centerville have involved teenage drivers. Since a number of(6) parents in Centerville have complained that they are too busy to teach their teenagers to drive(5), some other instruction is necessary to ensure that these teenagers are safe drivers. Although there are two driving schools in Centerville, parents on a tight budget(6) cannot afford to pay for driving instruction. Therore an fective and mandatory program sponsored by the high school(8,9) is the only(7) solution to this serious problem(4)."
提纲:
1. The author’s assumption that all students in Centerville need to take the course is open to doubt.
2. The arguer fails to point out the severity of accidents, and who actually caused these accidents.
3. In the absence of comparative accident rate during earlier years, we cannot evaluate if the situation are getting worse and if the program is necessary.
4. The high accident rate might be caused by many factors, thus implementing the program alone may not suffice to ensure lower accident rate.
5. Having no time to teach their children to drive does not necessarily imply that the parents are unable to ensure their children to be safe drivers, the safe-driving course is not equal to driving instruction.
6. The author fails to inform us the percentage of parents who have no time to teach their children to drive and who are on tight budgets.
7. The proposed program sponsored by the high school may not be the only solution to the problem.
8. The author fails to consider if the high school are qualified to offer the program.
9.The author fails to consider if the high school has the responsibility and enough funding to sponsor the program, and if students will accept it.
注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。
无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。
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