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题目题材:社会
gre argument 184题目:
In the Bayhead Public Library, books that are rarely borrowed continue to take up shelf space year after year, while people who want to read a recent novel frequently find that the library&aposs only copy is checked out. Clearly, the library&aposs plan to replace books that are borrowed no more than once a year with sufficient copies of more recent books(1,2) will solve this problem(3). The protest we have heard since this plan was made public has come from a small, and thus unrepresentative, group of some thirty people(4,5) and so should therore be ignored.
提纲:
1. The author ignores the negative fects of replacing books that are rarely borrowed with more recent books.
2. The author ignores the fact that the recent books will lose their popularity after a period of time, thus stocking large amount of recent book might cause many problems.
3. The author unfairly implies that the library has only two options: to maintain the status quo or to follow the proposed plan, while ignores other possible solutions to solve the problem.
4. The fact that only 30 people protest the proposal does not indicate that all other people support the proposal.
5.The author fails to provide detailed information about the 30 people who protest the proposal, they many have great influence on the community.
注:题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。
无论是gre issue还是gre argument,考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性,而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。
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