雅思写作中 需避免的十种开头.

　　万事开头难，雅思写作对于同学来说开头也算是一大难项。许多同学认为雅思作文评分标准和开头以及结尾有很大关联性。雅思写作万能模板便成为了众多学生的救命稻草，甚至生搬硬套。这对于自身的雅思成绩是没有任何好处的。因此，我们需要了解需要避免的十种开头有哪些。

　　需规避雅思写作开头一：中式英文 人见人晕(喷血指数：☆☆☆☆☆)

　　典型失败案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

　　In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

　　Topic 2- The population problem

　　The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

　　Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

　　I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

　　Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

　　Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”.

　　需规避雅思写作开头二：废话连篇不知所云(喷血指数：☆☆☆)这也是在雅思作文评分标准中最忌讳的地方。

　　典型失败案例： Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

　　修改方案：开门见山 直奔主题

　　In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married.

　　Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真题)

　　Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

　　Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection

　　Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!

　　需规避雅思写作开头三：观点模糊 态度暧昧(喷血指数：☆☆☆)

　　典型失败案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

　　需规避雅思写作开头四：偏离主题 无轨电车(喷血指数：☆☆☆☆)

　　典型失败案例：Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真题)

　　I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

　　需规避雅思写作开头五：语法错误 惨不忍睹(喷血指数：☆☆☆)

　　典型失败案例：Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished? (雅思真题)

　　About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.

　　需规避雅思写作开头六：过分简单 没有重点(喷血指数：☆☆)当然，这也是雅思写作万能模板中，价值信息最小的一种开头。

　　典型失败案例：Topic-The importance of environmental protection

　　This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

　　需规避雅思写作开头七：用词不当 表达不准 (喷血指数：☆☆)

　　典型失败案例：Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

　　需规避雅思写作开头八：意思重复 原地踏步(喷血指数：☆☆☆)

　　典型失败案例：Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

　　My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

　　需规避雅思写作开头九： 观点武断 态度强硬 (喷血指数：☆☆☆)

　　典型失败案例：Topic1-The importance of confidence

　　In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.

　　Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem

　　I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

　　需规避雅思写作开头十：中国俗语 胡乱翻译(喷血指数：☆☆☆☆☆)

　　典型失败案例：Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

　　I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

　　正确说法：Happiness lies in having many children

　　Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

　　We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, don’t know is don’t know”……

　　Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

　　Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……

　　Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

　　I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.

　　以上就是雅思写作中需要避免的十种开头值得提醒的是，雅思作文评分标准是作文的整体框架和语言逻辑性，并不能单靠开头来评定。当然，也不能一味的选用雅思写作万能模板来撰写。所以学生在写作上要全面下功夫。单纯的抓住开头死都不放的做法是笨拙之举。最后小编预祝同学们在雅思考试中取得好的成绩。

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　　【课程特色】

　　资深外教老师上课，针对雅思口语考试的出题特点，打分规则及考生在考场中所暴露的种种问题，对雅思口语考题进行梳理，分类讲解，并对雅思口语答题策略做详细归纳，帮助学生在考场避免常见错误，发挥出最佳状态。以故事形式串讲词汇，更容易记忆。串讲过程中融入国外的风土人情介绍，揭开国外生活的点点滴滴。重视词汇的雅思性，避免盲目记词。重视单词的实际使用，辅以各种句型。着重口语拓展技巧讲解，注重口语卡片的重点突波。每次课程讲解内容按话题分类，相对独立。针对中国考生薄弱环节，打造简单实用的口语表述，使学生轻松应对考试话题，征服考官，口语将不再是中国考生的梦魇。

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　　【课程简介】

　　学生能够就某一话题进行拓展，能够有效完成口语考试题目，雅思考试口语单项得分在6分及以上。

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