雅思参考范文：妇女犯罪率提高的原因和解决.

　　Some reports have discovered the incidence of violence for young women is increasing. Give possible reasons and recommendations to the situation.

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　　It is reported that the proportion of young female criminal unfolds a steady increasing trend, and women crime, especially the young female&aposs delinquency has become a serious social problem indeed. Young women, as the most peaceable parts of human, are always regarded as the last aim by the police office. Why they go astray is mainly due to the two following reasons: one is their own character peculiarity, the other is from social pressure.

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　　As far as the former, for one thing, the female is sensitive to the trifles and sentimental to the reins and loves. Sensitivity often puts them to the edge unnecessarily and forms extreme ideas, which frequently leads to direct criminal. Frangibility of sensibility makes them so depressed and despaired that they have a high probability to do the illegal behavior when they slip down in loves.

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　　As for the latter reason, the social pressure comes of traditionally sexual discrimination and survival competition. It is no denying the fact that the contemporary including the women are confronted with the more severe competition than their ancestors were, and in addition to this point, females still have to struggle with the deep-booted discrimination.

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　　When young women make their debut in the society, all kinds of crises, trouble and pressure lay them into flat, which compels them to avenge and relieve their feeling with lawless methods in unassisted situation. Ponderance of young female criminal reveals long-term negligence to the female&aposs inner and outer circumstance. It is almost impossible to change female&aposs nature, so the society should take more care of women, especially for the young women. For example, some psychological courses and the methods of solving problem are fective measures to adjust the mood of women. In the meantime, prejudice to women should be out of the social stage and fair, equal and friendly atmosphere should be set up, which can help women to take part in the formal and rational contention. Additionally, the society should approbate the female&aposs indispensable position of community and encourage them to show their special aptitude and intelligence.

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　　Undisputablely, the rising criminal rate of young women has relation to both females themselves and irrational social phenomena. Care and equity are the best way to solve this increasing problem, after all, they are less aggressive.

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