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在中国考生的雅思写作中,动词和形容词是主角,但是实际上,在真正的英语写作中,名词才是占据主导地位的词,这就是东西方的语言习惯的不同。想要拿到雅思8分以上就要对这个问题多加注意啦。
不要对“动词”、“形容词”过分依赖,要多用“名词结构”。
The sedentary and isolated lifestyle has become more and more popular and been accepted by more and more young people.
改:The sedentary and isolated lifestyle has found its growing popularity and acceptance among young people.
conclude that… → draw a conclusion that…
visit some place → pay a visit to some place
invest…in … → devote an investment to…
be popular → gain its popularity
be humorous → have a sense of humor
be important → be of importance
be valuable �→ be of value
be usul → be of use
be helpful → be of help
be ficient → be of ficiency
不要总是用“有生命的名词”或“人称代词”做主语:
⑴ Many people think that to set up a camera in the residential area is one of the best ways to ensure the security of the dwellers.
改:It is generally thought that to set up a camera in the residential area is one of the best approaches to ensure the security of the residents 。
⑵ More and more people agree that women should enjoy full equality with men.
改:There is a growing agreemen among people that women should enjoy full equality with men.
⑶ More and more people realize the close connection between energy and population..
改:The close connection between energy and population is increasingly recognized.
⑷ There are many people who prer to go by bike, because they are not satisfied with bus service.
改:The public prerence for going by bicycles rlects their dissatisfaction with bus service.
⑸ We can see from the graph that the population of Alia grew in the 20th century.
改:The graph shows/It can be seen from the graph that the population of Alia grew in the 20th century.
改:As can be seen from the graph the population of Alia grew in the 20th century.
从上面的例子中我们就可以发现很多的关于名词用法的雅思写作,这样的技巧对大家的英语基础提出了很高的要求,希望大家参照上面的例子,让自己的写作都有提高。
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