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说到雅思高分写作范文,相信很多考生心中都会发出同样一个疑问,“凭什么它就能够成为雅思高分写作范文,而我的作文却分数平平?”。是的,雅思高分写作范文高分在哪呢?一般来说,首先雅思写作想获得高分,良好的逻辑结构和主线是非常重要的“架子”;其次,还需要丰富的句子、语法和词汇去装饰这个“架子”,这样才能成为考官眼中的高分雅思写作范文。
下面澳际小编就整理了一篇关于压力的雅思写作高分范文,这篇雅思写作范文的主要内容是讨论关于压力是不是一件坏事的事情。现代社会是一个压力的社会,那么雅思是不是一件坏事呢就?大家可以用自己的经历或是想法作为论点。
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Is Stress A Bad Thing?
You should write at least 250 words. You should use your own ideas of knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
“I can’t understand the pressure and competition,” explained one friend of mine when asked why he decided to quit his highly-paid but demanding position in his company recently. My friend may have his own reasons, but I don’t think his decision is wise in reality.
It’s true that my friend’s case is not unique. In the last few years quite a number of men and women have chosen to do something less competitive at the cost of a comfortable, easy life a highly-paid job can obtain. They are afraid that the stresses and strains of work will rob them of joy and happiness and do them harm both physically and mentally. In fact, however, stress isn’t the bad thing it is often supposed to be. Unless it gets out of control, a certain amount of stress is vital to provide motivation and challenge, and to give purpose and significance to an otherwise meaningless, idle life. People under stress tend to express their full range of potential and to actualize their own personal worth— the very aim of a human life.
Stress is a natural part of everyday life and there is no way to avoid it. What we can do is to develop our adaptive abilities to deal with it rather than to escape from it. (216 words)!
以上就是关于压力的雅思高分写作范文,可以看出这篇写作范文的论据是非常有力的,逻辑结构也非常清晰,而在句型运用上,简单句搭配复杂句,而且并不重复,这些都构成了一篇雅思高分写作范文所需的各种因素。
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