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下面为大家整理的是关于雅思G类小作文的写作方法,雅思G类小作文是以书信的格式进行的,和大作文有很大的区别,需要大家进行格外的集中式备考。那么怎样做我们的雅思G类小作文才能写好呢?
雅思G类小作文的书信写作一定要记得:以完成任务为中心。题目中所有的细节必须涉及,所有的问题必须回答。
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移民类书信写作的难度相对于学术类的作文要简单一些,但是,由于很多移民类考生对于雅思书信写作的考试要求并不十分清楚,于是在参加考试时,无意中丢了分数也不得而知。下面,澳际小编将对G类考试的评分标准和常考的几种G类信件的词汇句型加以分析,给广大G类考生一些参考。
PartA: Assessment Criteria
Task 1 scripts are assessed on the following criteria:
� Task Achievement (i.e. how fectively the candidate has identified,illustrated and reported the key features of the information in the task)
� Coherence and Cohesion (i.e. how well the information and ideas areorganized, presented and linked)
� Lexical Resource (i.e. the range of vocabulary used, how accurately it isused and how appropriate it is for the task)
� Grammatical Range and Accuracy (i.e. the range of structures used, how accuratelythey are used and how appropriate they are for the task)
Part B: 一篇好的书信
不要为了写信而写信,应该更加人性化,脉络清晰,减少语法错误。
Part C: Task 1书写格式及注意事项
信首 不写收信人的具体姓名
引言 写信的理由
主体 对各个要求做出回答
结尾 告诉收信人怎样做
结束语 不要忘记逗号
签名 不写署名
Part D: Type of letters
1. Letterof Complaint
词汇:
complain against sb. about sth. 投诉......
dissatisfaction with 不满于......
put up with / bear / tolerate 忍受
awful 糟糕的
poor service 糟糕的服务
inconceivable 不可思议的
out of one’s expectation 令某人大失所望
look into / go into / investigate 调查
incident / matter 事件
sanitary situation 卫生条件
bad manners 不礼貌
disturbance 干扰
nuisance 麻烦事
remedy 补救
solve 解决
recurrence 再次发生
句型:
1) I am writing to you to complainabout ...
2) I am writing to express mydissatisfaction with...
3) There are some problems with thlat that I wish to bring to attention. For one thing, there is…For another,...
4) I can hardly bear /tolerate /put upwith it any more.
5) I hope that the authoritiesconcerned will consider my suggestions and improve the situation as best asthey can.
6) I sincerely hope that it willreview its management system, with the view to providing, better service to thepublic.
7) We trust that you will now considerthis matter seriously and make an fort to prevent the recurrence of thiskind.
8) We will appreciate your willingnessto make up for the loss.
2. Letterof Inquiry
词汇:
inquire about 咨询
seek 寻求
obtain 获得
regarding, concerning 关于
provide sb. with sth. 提供
inform sb. of sth. 通知某人某事
convenience方便
look forward to (doing) sth. 盼望...
prompt / immediate 及时的
take into account of sth. / take sth.into account 考虑到...
detailed 详细的
essential / necessary 必要的
gratul / obliged 感激的
appreciation 感激
be concerned about... 对...关心
句型:
1) I would like to obtain someinformation about…
2) I would like some detailedinformation on / about...
3) I am an overseas student who lives/studies in...
4) I am writing to you in the hopethat I may obtain...
5) I wonder if there is a tennis clubavailable.
6) I would be much obliged to you ifyou could let me know the procedures I have to go through.
7) Your prompt and favorable attentionto my inquiry would be highly appreciated.
8) I am looking forward to a favorablereply at your earliest convenience.
通过上面的解析和例子,我们就可以看到很多雅思G类小作文的书信写作部分都是有着一定的固定模板的,所以大家只要在写作的过程中掌握的一定的规则之后就可以有很大的发挥余地,写好书信也就不难了。
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