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雅思写作高分范文.

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  雅思写作题目一般来说都是引用当局最新的实事来选择的,很具有一定的鲜明性,以往的很多雅思写作范文也都是很优秀的,有很多都是雅思写作高分范文,这些都是前辈们的经验。

  那么,看到雅思写作题目的时候,要多多的看一看以前的雅思写作范文,看看那些雅思写作高分范文是怎样的思路,这对我们的写作帮助很大。

  Advantages and disadvantages of private cars

  With the fantastic spur both in industry and in economy in China, the number of people who own private cars is on the rise. Some people have bought cars of their own, and others are planning to buy cars. But there have been two quite different views on this phenomenon.

  Some claim that there are many advantages brought about by cars. First, the automobile industry provides jobs for countless workers and strong support for other industries. Second, if conditions permit, owning a car can make us work more ficiently. Finally, life will become more convenient. A car allows one to move freely and with a car there is no need to wait for the bus in the cold or under the burning sun.

  However, others strongly object to the increase in developing private cars. They hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems. In the first place, as more and more cars are produced and run in the street, a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off, polluting the atmosphere and causing actual harm to the health of people. Next, private cars contribute to traffic congestion so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedom are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams. The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people in a friction of a second.

  In my opinion, although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society, they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution, more traffic accidents and more energy consumption. They drink up huge amounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants. Traffic accidents kill thousands and thousands of people each year and cripple more. Jams waste our precious time. Therore I am against developing private cars.

  以上就是以往的雅思写作题目中的雅思写作高分范文,那么雅思写作范文的思路不知道大家会不会有什么提示和思路了呢?希望我的例子对大家的雅思成绩是有帮助的,祝愿大家有一个好的成绩。

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  【课程特色】

  雅思写作考试是雅思四门课里最难得高分的一门科目。但是根据近几年的考题回顾,我们发现雅思写作在考题内容上重复性较高,而学生在参加写作考试时往往会走入死背模板,思路短路,词汇枯竭等盲区。而写作考分过低也拖累了学员的总分,影响了留学计划或者是移民的进程。

  以专题讲座的形式,系统性且实效性地深入分析雅思大,小作文的写法,帮助学员在短期内梳理写作高分词汇,句型,思路,拓展方式,高分写作语法及学员范文剖析,真正意义上地突破雅思写作7分。

  【授课教材】

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  【课程简介】

  针对雅思写作考试的特点,评分规则及最近考试趋势,对旨在突破雅思写作7分以上的学员进行系统性的写作技巧的梳理和应试技巧的指导。

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