雅思写作第一印象很重要.

　　很多考生常常在雅思写作开篇的时候就卡壳了，究竟为什么呢?小编认为主要是各位考生并不知道如何把作文衔接起来，与此同时就暴露了你的英语水平。大家平时写汉语作文的时候，我们管好的开头叫凤头对不对?其实无论是在哪看来，好的开头会很影响给人的好的第一印象。我们要避免哪些糟糕的开头。下面澳际小编喵喵带大家看看那些不好的模式：

　　一：满篇赘述，毫无重点。

　　典型失败案例： Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

　　修改方案：开门见山 直奔主题

　　In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。

　　Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真题)

　　Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

　　Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection

　　Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!

　　二：中式英语 毫无章法

　　典型失败案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

　　In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

　　Topic 2- The population problem

　　The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

　　Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

　　I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

　　Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

　　Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”.

　　三：观点模糊 态度摇摆

　　典型失败案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

　　四：偏离主题 不知所云

　　典型失败案例：Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真题)

　　I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

　　以上就是小编精心为大家总结的雅思写作技巧。希望大家通过对雅思写作技巧的掌握，能够写出让人眼前一亮的作文开头。相信大家通过雅思写作学习，一定会取得好成绩!关于雅思写作给考生有任何疑问，欢迎咨询澳际教育!澳际上，澳际始终与你同在!