想要提高雅思成绩？谨慎使用模板！.

　　澳际小编知道，很多人对于提高雅思写作有很迫切的需求，但是却常常把对这一块的复习放到最后，最后经常导致复习时间不够，所以很多同学就开始背诵雅思作文模板，但是大家不知道这样做其实并不利于作文写作的提高，而且很多同学前一段是模板写的非常完美，后一段是自己写的内容，写的很差，这样反而导致成绩难以提高。

　　雅思的意义，在于考官是英文母语者，他们的标准就一条：“我只看你写的东西是否合理和恰当”。(whether youcan present ideas logically and naturally)

　　模板之害，就是在于学生即便有想法，也说不完，因为说完了，模板就套不上了。

　　素材之害，就是在于学生即便觉得不对，也要写上去，因为既然背了，不写就白背了。

　　该写的不写，不该写的写了。

　　在以前的考试能够活的下去。雅思却不行。

　　这就是为什么很多老师和学生总是觉得雅思不公平，很难。。

　　其实，是以前的考试太简单了。

　　我们看看下面这个题目两个学生的段落，还有我的段落对比。Some people believe that the best way to produce a happier society is to ensure that thereare only small differences between the richest and the poorest members. To what extent doyou agree or disagree?

　　第一个学生 (用了模板)Many people think that narrowing the gap between the rich and the poor helps create ahappier society (为了套模板，抄了题目，考官要看到的是真正的观点).one main reason is that (还是模板，但是这句话说的是社会不公平的坏处，前面一句话说的是贫富减少的好处，两句话中间思维跳跃)imbalance social distribution causes some argument and these argument can pose athreat to the society. For example (再套模板，这个例其实根本就不是例子，例子是解释前面名名词的东西), the crime rate may decrease because the poor can afford their living cost and they feelhappy because they be treated equality in the society instead of classifying by their property.

　　第二个学生 (用了素材)Less differences between people from different backgrounds make it easier for them toshare equal access to social resources such as educational oppurtunities, health care etc. bydoing so, people can make the same success. For instance, a student from disadvanteged familycan also become a high caliber one. When people all can fulfill their potential and succeed intheir own businesses, there would not be discriminations (用了素材的观点，没有歧视，而这里的上下文根本不可能提到歧视，逻辑一下就乱了). So, people feel happier.

　　下面是我的段落

　　Closing the gap between rich and poor requires governments to pay attention to the well-being of poor people and take action to ensure that these people lead a happy life. For example,these people can go to college and have the same opportunities to get better-paying jobs asthose from rich families. They can get rid of poverty and enjoy a reasonable standard ofliving. This is a vital part of a happy society. In contrast, crimes can be rampant in a societywhere people are at a disadvantage due to their social status.

　　很多学生对待雅思考试只是简单的把这个当成是一项测试，完成测试之后就不管了，但是雅思考试其实是对大家英语能力的考验，而且大家日后还要再留学生活中用到英语，这样的行为只会让自己的留学生活变得更加艰难。