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如何在雅思大作文上得分?.

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  大作文是雅思作文很大的一个组成部分,能够在雅思大作文上得分优秀,那么这个雅思考生的雅思写作部分也就没有什么好担心的了,但是很多时候考生并不知道雅思大作文的写作要点,也就无从谈起如何在雅思大作文上得分,以下就是澳际小编总结的雅思写作的大作文部分的得分要点,希望对各位有所启示。

  1.如果两个简单句没有因果关系,基本上是两个独立的事情,往往可以简单地用and相连。

  例如:Children are not sensitive to prices and parents prer to satisfy their needs.

  2) 如果两个简单句有一定的因果关系,往往可以用状语从句相连。

  例如:If advertising campaigns directed at children are regulated, children will not pester their parents to buy many goods for them。

  3) 如果状语从句怕重复,可以用and(或者;)+连接词的方式。

  例如有很多连接词because of this, as a result of this, consequently, as a consequence 等,都是表示因果关系。

  例句为Some children are addicted to violent video games, and because of this, they can show aggression and bully their peers at school。

  4) 如果第一个单句的最后一个单词和第二个单句的第一个单词重复,可以用定语从句连接。

  举例:原句为Children are increasingly temperamental due to their addiction to violent electronic games. These games are normally promoted by advertising firms. 可以看出,重复的词为games。因此,此句可改成:Children are increasingly temperamental due to their addiction to violent electronic games, which are normally promoted by advertising firms。

  5) 如果第二个单句是第一个单句的结果,有可能使用非限制性定语从句。

  如Advertisements have given a lot of information about products. This enables parents to make well-informed buying decisions. 可改成:Advertisements have given a lot of information about products, which can help parents to make well-informed buying decisions。

  雅思大作文写作字数要求不少于250字,主题能够清楚明白的告诉考官你的这段内容里面要说什么,这样子才可以有心情看下去。如果你有很好的主题句,考官会很有兴趣看你的文章!另外好的主题句也能帮助你把整篇文章的结构更加清晰,从而写出一篇高质量的文章来。

  雅思大作文评分标准:

  想要在雅思大作文部分拿到高分,大家要首先明白这样的评分标准,有的时候你自己理解的雅思写作评分标准并不是最真实的评分标准,想要写出一篇优秀的雅思作文,大家不仅要从小处着手背好雅思写作词汇,更应该从大处着眼,弄清楚整个雅思作文篇章的结构。

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