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相信大家在平时的雅思写作练习中老师都反复地强调过,一定要重视雅思作文首首尾的写作,因为很多时候阅卷老师没有那么多时间看你的作文,通常通过首尾就把你的命运给决定了。今天我们就来聊一下雅思写作的结尾段,希望对于雅思写作结尾段技巧的探讨对可谓烤鸭有所帮助。
1. 再次陈述主题。用 paraphrase 方式再次呈现主题陈述中出现的三要素: a.问题中存在争议的地方; b.观点;c.理由。
2. 结束句。放在陈述完主题之后。
雅思写作辅导提出结尾段结束句的三种常见写法:
一. 雅思作文的最后总结教训或提出建议
In conclusion, whether to imitate or vary from others to achieve success, it hinges mostly on the occupations we engage in. For jobs like doctors that require routine practices, it is unnecessary for them to make alterations to become successful. Whereas artists like painters whose works are characteristic of creativity and imagination, it is of crucial importance to distinguish from others to succeed.
二. 提出令人忧虑的结果或可能出现的负面结果
假设读者没有想作者说的那样去做,在结论中提出将会出现的负面结果,帮助读者预见到令人忧虑的后果,进而令读者自然第接受作者的意见。
e.g., To summarize, on one hand, for artists who are fortunate to profit immensely from their occupation, it is unnecessary for the government to offer additional financial incentives for them. On the other hand, government should provide financial support and appropriate policies to impoverished artists who engage in conventional craftsmanship because these are viewed as national treasure and cultural heritage of the country. If the government did not support those unfortunate traditional artists, the valuable conventional forms of arts would disappear very soon.
三. 提出问题留待读者思考
In conclusion, it is inevitable for children to commit mistakes at a young age, parents should play their part to instill the importance of good behaviors in their children. Parents should allow children to make small mistakes as a meaningful learning experience. However, what would be like if parents permit their children to commit serious mistakes like tht and robbery?
结尾段常用表达方式:
Finally, thus, in a word, in bri;
In conclusion, to conclude, in the end;
In the final analysis, in a nutshell, on the whole;
To summarize, to encapsulate, in sum, in summary
In light of these facts, considering these ideas
除了以上的这些常见的雅思写作技巧,其实大家在平时在的雅思写作练习中还有很多方面需要特别注意,上述的技巧尤其适合雅思大作文,另外如果大家想要告别雅思写作低分,最好特别练习一下不同的雅思作文类型。
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