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2017年9月3日雅思写作真题分享.

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  Task 1

  The bar chart shows the information about the favourite subjects of 60 students from 2 schools, school A and school B.

  分析:

  本次的小作文考查了柱状图,且为静态图。配图是根据网友回忆所做,数据仅供参考。纵轴代表人数,时态在回忆的图中没有明确显示,范文用过去式为主。在写作时,要注意数据内和数据间的比较。

  范文:

  The bar chart shows the students’major prerence between school A and school B. The optional subjects are social science, science, language, sport and craft & drawing.

  In school A, more than half of the students (36) chose sport as their favourite subject, compared with 5 in school B. By contrast, the rest subjects are all not very popular among students in school A.

  In school B, 25 students enjoyed craft and drawing, which was more than five times as many as the students number in school A.(4). Also, the figure in language came second in school B, roughly reaching 18 and narrowly beating social science into third place. In addition, no matter in school A or school B, students were not quite interested in social science and science, with less than 10 persons in both.

  Overall, students in school A and school B had different major prerence. Students in school A liked sport the most and disliked craft and drawing while students in school B were more fond of craft and drawing taut were not much crazy about science.

  Task 2

  题目:

  Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of their fear of crime. Some people believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime, but others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

  题型:论述类议论文

  分析:

  今天出现的是2012年11月3日的老题,而且犯罪类也是常考话题之一。今年出现老题的概率似乎有点高,但是建议大家去把老题都写一遍显然是不可能完成的任务。当然, 这并不意味着大家因此可以放弃对写作部分的准备。备考期间,对雅思作文常出现的十个话题进BRAINSTORM的练习才能够帮助广大烤鸭在考场上做兵来将挡,水来土掩。

  文章结构:4段

  首段:导入话题,表达立场。

  主体段1:采取措施能够防止犯罪的理由。

  主体段2:几乎没有措施能够阻止犯罪的理由。

  总结段:总结上文,重申立场。

  范文:

  With a rapid increase of crime, more citizens are scared of aggressive acts all over the world. As to whether more measures can be taken to stop crime, there is an endless debate. From my personal view, although more actions cannot fully guarantee the security of the whole society, it is not the reason for which people can surrender to violence.

  Clearly, actions such as enacting more strict laws and legislations can fectively curb the frequency of crime. Fearing punishment is usually the nature of humans, so when they are informed of the consequence of committing crimes, they are more prone to stop doing anti-social acts. In addition, providing moral education contributes to raise people< s safety awareness and consequently prevents crime. As the Internet prevails, information about laws and legislations are more achievable, and thus there is a possibility that people are given more opportunities to learn how to distinguish right from wrong.

  However, feasible measures are still not a panacea to the establishment of a completely safe society. If governments fail to guarantee a basic living standard for their citizens, crime rate will hardly be controlled. It is widely believed that a decent job and sufficient disposable income can reduce the possibility of committing socially unacceptable behaviour. The insecurity of society can also be attributed to the fact that it is less possible for governments to eradicate all factors leading to crime. Illegal drugs and alcohol are more accessible than bore. People may have to commit crimes in order to get these items.

  To conclude, reasonable actions including making severe policies and offering education are of great help to control criminal events. However, they may still not be able to ensure a secure living environment for people if fundamental needs of materials cannot be fulfilled.

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