SAT写作应避免哪些错误.

　　SAT写作可以说是中国考生比较拿手的科目，平时总结的SAT写作材料很丰富，SAT写作真题也是每天必练，所以SAT写作其实没有很难。下面小编给大家介绍一下SAT写作应避免哪些错误。

　　其实很多学生在语言运用、语句结构、段落组织上都很欠缺，多数学生的文章只是平铺直叙，没有感染力，今天我们就来看一位学生的文章，写作老师给出了修改和点评，都是大部分学生容易犯的错误，希望学习以后能够对大家提高写作有所帮助。

　　学生习作

　　People often focus mostly on the advantageous side when they make a decision. Thus they often neglect the other side of the decision, which may lead to an unpleasant end. My family was also not able to avoid this kind of regrettable experience. From that failure, we should see both sides of an issue.

　　语言修改

　　Most often when people make a decision they focus on the advantages. Thus they often neglect the other side of the decision, which may lead to an unpleasant end. My family was also not able to avoid this kind of regrettable experience. From that failure, we should see both sides of an issue.

　　本段评点

　　许多学生过多地使用了therore和thus. 这样的词是用来得出结论的。“很多人只看有利的一面而忽视不利的一面”这句话中用“而”或者“并且”连接两个分句，而不可以使用 therore, thus, as a result 等表达。这样导致问题这两个方面的逻辑关系混乱，其实并不是因为人们只看有利面而导致忽视不利一面这个结果。建议大家一定注重总结SAT写作材料，勤加练习SAT写作真题。

　　学生习作

　　My family used to live in a village, but my parents went to urban to work and I to study. It was a long distance, so we had to spend an average of 3.5 hours in our car everyday. We had to get up early to set out and return home late at night. Moreover, we could not watch TV together, but be together in the car, feeling sleepy. Of course, we were unwilling to accept the situation and we thought of moving to the urban area to save our time and to live a more convenient life. So we did, half a year ago.

　　语言修改

　　My family used to live in a village, but my parents moved[1] to the city to work and I to study. It was a long distance to travel to the city every day with an average of 3.5 hours spent in our car.[2] We had to get up early to set out and return home late at night. Unlike other families that watch TV or have other fun together, we spent hours in a car, which was boring and even painful. Of course, this situation was unacceptable to us so we thought of moving to the city to save time and make our lives more convenient.[3]. So we did, half a year ago.

　　本段评点

　　文章这个例子的叙述过于细节化，显得有些琐碎，这也导致这个例子用了三段来叙述，占了大量的篇幅和写作时间，使得作者可能无法再写个例子。另外，这段中的句式也缺少变化，例如大部分句子都是We再加上一个谓语这样的结构。

　　以上即是小编今天跟大家分享的一些知识点。希望大家能够避免这些错误。最后小编还是建议大家多积累SAT写作材料。多做SAT写作真题，相信过不了多长时间大家的SAT写作成绩就会有明显的提高。

　　澳际培训SAT写作名师班:

　　【课程特色】

　　SAT写作被戏称为GRE写作的简单版，对学员的写作功底有很高的要求，要求作文结构完整，语言高端，用词精准，有自己独特的观点，例子展开必须充分，评论有亮点，而这些均是中国考生的薄弱之处，词汇量受限，语法功底不扎实。写作没有自己的观点，举例不当甚至不会举例说明。以上种种都造成了学员对SAT写作的恐惧。针对SAT写作的特点及中国学生的短板，老师通过大量的SAT考试素材，系统性且实效性地深入分析SAT写作的特点和应对策略，帮助学员在短期内梳理写作高分词汇，句型，思路，扩展方式，高分写作语法及学员范文剖析，在SAT写作中取得理想的高分。

　　【授课教材】

　　SAT历年考试真题

　　名师内部讲义

　　【课程简介】

　　针对SAT写作考试的特点，评分规则及最近的考试趋势，对学员进行系统性的写作技巧的梳理和应试技巧的辅导。

　　【适合人群】

　　即将参加SAT考试，但是写作较为薄弱的学生。

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