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在写Essay的过程中,有几类话题是该避开不谈的。这些话题有些事不太适合大学申请,更有的会给大学申请带来麻烦,而有些是大家都一样的句子,这些句子都已经被招生人员熟悉的不能再熟悉,最好是避开不谈.
Your relationship with your girlfriend or boyfriend.
Your religious belis—unless you’re applying to a college with a strong religious orientation.
Your conservative (or any other) political views.
The evils of drugs. They are evil, but essays tend to sound contrived.
Your SAT scores. Never ever mention your scores no matter how good or bad they are.
Any topic that doesn’t appeal to you but that you think will appeal to an admission officer. They have built in phoniness alarms.
Anything that will make the reader, who might be a grandmotherly type, blush or be embarrassed.
Anything that will reveal that you are a poor college prospect—such as how you hate to study.
Big or general ideas about how you will help the world live together in peace and harmony. Stick with details.
Any topic that draws attention to your academic weaknesses.
How you saw very poor but very happy people on an Interim trip and realized how “lucky” they are or you are.
How you helped the team win the big game.
Anything that makes it sound like you’re going to college for the sole purpose of learning how to make a lot of money.
Any topic specifically mentioned as a great essay topic in one of those how-to-get-into-college books. Several thousand other students read the same book and will write on the same topic.
总之,对于Essay的写作,大家应该引起注意,什么该写进去,什么不该写进去,要好好考虑,如果有什么不太明白的地方,欢迎来澳际咨询。
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