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下面的这篇美国留学申请文书的内容最后也用在了别的学校的申请文书里。我没有重新选择另一个主题,而是仅仅对文书的框架做了小调整。另外,MUN的例子现在已经太多,建议同学们要慎重使用。
美国留学申请文书要有升华,要有提炼,要有进步。你,这么一个小毛孩,现在逐渐长大,有什么感想和感悟?这些感悟不是从天上掉下来的,而是一次次挫折和挑战中来的。有的人失败了,后退了,你呢,后退也要给出一个说法。这个说法,就是升华。
Should I now continue as usual, leaving this mountain unclimbed like a loser, or should I start to try on a totally different perspective? Things changed after thinking and struggling many days, I realized life could be perceived from another perspective. Life is about the journey, not the destination itself. I was always the top student in my class and gradually I was almost led to think naturally that I must pursue and get every reward I want. But things are not always this case. Failure from other perspective is sometime a victory in life. Nevertheless, I now have come to realize that rewards and recognition are not the end, whereas the perseverance to pursue perfection leading up to self improvement can be as important as a trophy on the wall. Looking back at MUN, I began to understand the true meaning of the event. The MUN is not a place where we compete in our English proficiency or where we step over one another so that we can reach to the top. The MUN is a place where we, the promising youth, gather together and share our interpretation and responsibility towards the world where we live in together, and a place we communicate and acquaint ourselves with the aspiring contemporaries.
这篇美国留学申请文书的主要精华就在这几句话,没有别的花巧可言。另外,前面的主题是关于登山和登山的挑战,这里和下面都要有个呼应,文章才是贯通一气的。
Amy GUO 经验: 16年 案例:4272 擅长:美国,澳洲,亚洲,欧洲
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