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雅思考试时间很宝贵,尤其大作文一般同学只留四十分钟,如何在这短短时间内将大作文写好。大作文的开头在这其中尤为重要。想短时高效写好大作文不简单,下面小编就为大家介绍三分钟写好雅思大作文技巧。
(一)单边支持/反对类型
提问:Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
范文1:(反对)
→ In my opinion , these subject are not only usul but also fascinating, and it is simply too early for primary schoolchildren to study science and technology.
(二)半支持半反对型
提问:To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
范文2:
→ From my point of view
(三)探讨双方型(可以参考前文“兼收并蓄”套路)
提问:Discuss both sides and give your own opinion
范文3:
→1. To my way of thinking , both sides of the argument have their own reasons, and we need a detailed analysis to get to the root of this controversy. 双方都有理,需要仔细分析才可了解争议起因
→2. To my way of thinking , both these views can be justified to some extent. 一定程度上都有道理
→3. To my way of thinking, both these views contain some elements of the truth, which will be discussed in detail in the following essay.
注:Which 引导定语从句很自然过渡到主体段
(四)分析解决型
提问:
In what ways could mobile phones and Internet be usul to older people? How can old people be encouraged to use this high technology?
→ To my mind
(五)陈述利弊型
提问:
Does the usulness of this method of learning outweigh its limitations?(advantage = usulness,disadvantage = limitations)
→ To the best of my knowledge
(六)多重选择型(少见)
提问:
What others factors should be considered? Of these factors, do you think anyone is more important than others?
→ As far as I am concerned
编者按:
大作文的开头一定要注意,可以写铺垫的句子来引出观点,但是如果铺垫的句子和下面引出的观点没有很好的逻辑联系,那么不如不写,而是开门见山的直接写观点句!
例如:
Recently, computer is very popular, therore computer games at
tract attention of the young. Some people think... , the others ar
gue that... ,
这个句子,划线的部分就很不好,没有必然的因果联系,这样来铺垫开头,不如不写,而直接写观点:
Recently, computer games prevail among the young, which arouses a debate on.... .
另外,以上推荐的大作文开头的一些套句可以使用,但记住,要6 分以上的同学,在使用这些套句后,一定要在套句里面写一些自己的观点、支持,以区别直接使用套句而没有original 内容的写作!
例如:
Nowadays, the matters about how we can teach our generations fectively have attracted intensive attention, one of which is whether the teenagers ought to do community work as a voluntary obligation. 这些是套句来表述题目内容的
Considering benits for teenagers physically and mentally, as well as reducing labor cost and creating a more warming atmosphere for the community, it is considerably a benicial method to the young and community, if providing safe working environment and clear growth goals for them in this project. 划线部分就是作者自己的原创。
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