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In June 1996, an experimental flu vaccine was trialled in a large country town on females only. The result of this survey is presented in the following illustration.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.


Sample Answer:

The given illustration presents data on the result of a survey made in a large town on flu vaccine. As is presented on the graphs, more female got affected by the flue than men and female death rate from this flu was more than the male counterpart.

As is presented in the first line graph, from February to September the number of people who were attached by the flu increased and after that the rate become stable. More female got attached by the flue than men and in the middle of the year this infection were spread among more than 3500 female and more than 2500 men. The bar graph shows the death rate from the flu and it can be observed that female death case was much more than the male death case. From June to august, 2 men died from the flu infection where 4 women died from the same flu.

Finally, the pie chart presents data on the aftermath of the vaccination. It can be observed that, older women and children were in more risk than other age groups of female.

(Approximately 184 words)

( This model answer can be followed as an example of a very good answer. However, please note that this is just one example out of many possible approaches.)

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