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美国留学申请中,essay指任何一种非小说性的,篇幅不长、结构简练的文章,如议论文、报道、评论、讽刺性杂文等,是美国留学申请中最重要却又最无规律可循的申请材料之一,那么怎样写出一篇好的Essay呢?下面,澳际教育专家为您介绍美国研究生Essay写作范文之展现团队合作精神,希望能够对申请美国留学的同学有所帮助。
I think a successful collaboration among students in a team project setting should bring every team members advantage into full play and could enhance the capacity of each other,so as to increase fectiveness of team work. Team members should trust and respect each other. There must be open communication and a willingness to accept different opinions from others.
In my sophomore year,I took part in the business plan competition held by our university. In this competition,I,cooperated with two of my roommates,built an indoor cultivation company. This idea was mainly come from indoor rice planting of a Japanese company for my roommates were major in food science. Our company mainly focuses on helping other companies to build indoor space for agricultural products planting,to achieve the goal of virescence and satisfy vegetable supply.
In the second section of our competition,we were required to sell our products in our university. Since my team members and I came from different cities and we were in different colleges,we had different social circles. It is an advantage for us because this competition not only require teams to market their products to more people,but emphasized on promoting it to a wider range of customers. Therore,I suggested that each of us promote our products to the potential consumers we were familiar with according to the different social circles such as colleges and organizations that we were in. So after a discussion,we listed the resources available to each of us and made a feasible sales plan. Then we started to carry out our sales task. Finally,we signed contracts with “customers” from 25 colleges of our university and successfully entered into the finals.
We attributed our success to our reasonable allocation of sales tasks so that we can fully explore the potential customers in our different social circles,which greatly improved our work ficiency. Therore,successful collaboration in a team project should give everyone a chance to tap one's potential to the full and achieve common goal through the joint forts.
Essay开头自己对成功的合作下了个定义。然后选取自己大学时参加学校的创业大赛,自己开办室内种植公司的经历。通过团队合作是每个人的优势得到最好的发挥,最终取得了成功。整个事例真实、生动、具体。
Amy GUO 经验: 16年 案例:4272 擅长:美国,澳洲,亚洲,欧洲
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